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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hHello! => Hello!

I'm yYoshihisa,_a man,I'm male and I'm 19 years old. => I'm Yoshihisa. I'm male and I'm 19 years old.

As you can see,_I have been learning English. => As you can see, I have been learning English.

To explain why I learn English,_I want to make friends from all over the world. => The reason I'm learning English is because I want to make friends from all over the world. =>> I am studying English in order to make friends from all over the world.

And I think English is the world's most popular language . => And I think English is the world's most popular language =>> And I believe English is the most widely used language in the world.

So,I think that Iif I_master English,_I will be able to communicate with an amazing number of people. => So I think that if master English, I would be able to communicate with an amazing number of people

In a summeary, Please please be my friend!! => In summary, please be my friend!

Thank you for your reading. => Thank you for reading!

Hope you find this helpful, and that you make a lot of friends! ^^