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初めまして、テイラーです。よろしくお願いします。
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日本語が下手です。2年間ぐらいに勉強してました。
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- ●AI will rob people of many jobs.This doesn't sound bad, but here are some other ways:AI will rob many people of their jobs.AI will rob humanity of many jobs.AI will rob society of many jobs.AI will rob the economy of many jobs.●When teaching we cannot rely on textbooks, we have to be more creative and pursue better methods.This may be a "run-on" sentence - I would split into two. Otherwise, the wording is OK. I also wrote another version of the 2nd part that sounds a bit more professional.When teaching, we cannot rely on textbooks. We have to be more creative and pursue better methods.When teaching, we cannot rely on textbooks. We must be creative and pursue more effective methods.●As long as you master English, it doesn’t matter what methods you use.Perfect!●I’m not sure when we will be able to return to normal life.Perfect!●The picture of a penguin on the small ice implies that ice polar is becoming smaller by global warming.There are some special wordings that are commonly used for ice - see the below versions:This picture of a penguin on a small block of ice implies that the polar ice caps are shrinking due to global warming.This photo of a penguin on a small chunk of ice shows that the polar ice caps are melting because of global warming.0 votedMay 25, 20201
- Sounds really good, well done! Here are a few notes.Our GardenWe live in our own house with a garden.We grow a lot of different vegetables and fruits in our garden:We usually say "fruits and vegetables", not "vegetables and fruits".It's ok to say "a lot of", but I think it sounds better to say "many"We grow many different fruits and vegetables in our gardenHere's another way of saying the same thing that sounds even more professional - "wide variety" is often used in the context of plants and gardeningWe grow a wide variety of fruits and vegetables in our gardenpotatoes, carrots, cucumbers, tomatoes, eggplants, bell peppers, cabbages, garlic, onions, radishes, corn, beans, beets, squashes, zucchinis, parsley, lettuces, blackberries, strawberries, raspberries, cherries, plums, cherry plums, pears, currants.potatoes, carrots, cucumbers, tomatoes, eggplants, bell peppers, cabbage, garlic, onions, radishes, corn, beans, beets, squashes, zucchinis, parsley, lettuce, blackberries, strawberries, raspberries, cherries, plums, cherry plums, pears, and currants.You need to work hard if you want to have your own vegetables but it's worth it.Sounds ok - here are a few variations that sound a bit more naturalYou need to work hard if you want to grow your own vegetables, but it's worth it.It takes hard work to grow your own vegetables, but it's worth it.Growing your own vegetables takes a lot of hard work, but it's worth it.I like working in the garden in May because the weather is not hot and there are not many bugs yet.In June mosquitoes appears and it's getting really hard to work outside.In June, mosquitoes appear and it gets really hard to work outside.Mosquitoes appear in June, and it gets really hard to work outside.Mosquitoes appear in June, making it difficult to work outside.They bites and mosquito repellent doesn't work.They bite and mosquito repellent doesn't work.They bite, and bug spray doesn't work.I love when trees in our garden begin to bloom.I love when the trees in our garden begin to bloom.Trees covered with blossoms are so beautiful! And the smell is wonderful!Trees covered with blossoms are so beautiful, and the smell is wonderful!Do you have a garden? Do you like to work in the garden? What do you grow there?0 votedMay 10, 20201
- Troubled abroadWe went to Sydney Airport to go to Ayers Rock.l missed my flight at the Sydney airport.Sounds ok, but would sound better to combine. Was it just you or with multiple people? Either:We went to the Sydney Airport to go to Ayers Rock, but we missed our flight.I went to the Sydney Airport to go to Ayers Rock, but I missed my flight.At that time, the response of the ground staff was cold.The response of the ground crew was cold.The response of the staff was cold.We called you on the air.They said, "We called you on the intercom"They said, "We called you on the speaker"Grand staff said, I was told that you shouldn't have noticed.The manager said, "I was told you should have heard the announcement."The manager said, "I was told you should've heard the announcement."The manager said, "You should've heard the announcement."We didn't know what to do after this.What was my checked baggage?Where was my checked baggage?Where was my checked luggage?Can I take the next flight?I was upset because it was the first time I missed an airplane overseas.I was upset because it was the first time I had missed a flight overseas.I was upset since it was the first time I'd missed a flight overseas.I contacted a Japanese travel agency and told them how to deal with it.I contacted a Japanese travel agency and asked them to deal with it.As a result, I decided to stay at a hotel near the airport that day, and decided to fly to Ayers Rock the next day.As a result, I decided to stay at a hotel near the airport that day and to fly to Ayers Rock the next day.As a result, I decided to stay the night at a hotel near the airport and to fly to Ayers Rock the next day.0 votedMay 10, 20200
- Translation homework (Japanese to English)The dog that lives in the house that is next to mine is usually clever, but when his master is next to him, he barks loud desperately.利口 ー "clever" vs "well behaved"躍起 ー "desperately" vs "frantically"The dog that lives in the house next to mine is usually well behaved, but he frantically barks when his master is around.I think he try to work his missions as a guard dog.I think he is trying to work on his guard dog skills.But, when I see his tail, it’s shaken as always.Every time I see him, his tail is always wagging.It might be he try to tell me “It isn’t real mind.”すみません、意味が分かりません。日本語で書いてください。Sometimes this cute action makes me touch to him, but it isn’t correct choice.Sometimes I want to pet him when he is acting cute, but that isn't a good idea.0 votedMay 10, 20202
- Please correct my sentencesWe have a freedom.We have freedom.We are free.We are lucky to have freedom.We are lucky to be free.So we can choose anything our hands.I wanna be flat my heart.すみません、意味が分かりません。日本語で書いてください。I want to make spending natural life.I want to spend my time living a natural life.I want to spend my life naturally.I want to live a natural life.0 votedMay 10, 20200
- <s>Go </s>Going Back to WorkThe enjoyable long holiday called Golden Week in Japan was finally over and the daily life is coming up again.The enjoyable long holiday called Golden Week in Japan is finally over and it's time to return to daily life.In Japan, the fun holiday called Golden Week is finally over and it's time to return to daily life.I'm going back to work next week and the first day back at work is always tough.I'm going back to work next week, and the first day back is always tough.However, I should think it is thankful thing for me to be able to return to work.However, I am thankful to be able to return to work.However, I think it is a good thing that I am able to return to work.Some people across the world were forced to lose their jobs since the global economy was getting worse due to the corona virus outbreak.Some people around the world were forced to leave their jobs when the global economy got worse due to the coronavirus outbreak.Some people around the world lost their jobs...Many people around the world lost their jobs...It is too bad and so sad.(this is correct grammar, but sounds rude/sarcastic - here are some other ways to say):It is a bad situation.It is a very sad situation.It is an unfortunate situation.On the other hand, the news says the government approved the medicine as a countermeasure for the corona virus.On the other hand, the news says the government approved a new medicine as a countermeasure for the coronavirus.On the other hand, the news says the government approved a new medicine to counter the coronavirus.I bet the company must be a miracle-worker because it took a short term to develop it.(miracle-worker usually refers to an individual person, not a company or group)I bet the company has a team of miracle-workers because it took such a short time to develop.I bet the company has a team of miracle-workers since it was developed so quickly.I bet the company has a team of miracle-workers given how quickly it was developed.Given how quickly it was developed, I bet the company has a team of miracle-workers.We're not out of the woods yet, but I think it is the light at the end of the tunnel for infected people.We're not out of the woods yet, but I think there is a light at the end of the tunnel for infected people.We're not out of the woods yet, but for infected people, I believe there is a light at the end of the tunnel.The tough situation still might continue, but I would like to cheer for researchers with a positive attitude who attempt to make the pandemic blow over.(blow over usually means something naturally ends vs. being actively caused to end)This tough situation might continue, but I cheer for the researchers with a positive attitude who are attempting to solve the pandemic.This tough situation might continue, but I cheer for the positive-minded researchers who are attempting to solve the pandemic.This tough situation might continue, but I applaud the researchers who are attempting to control this pandemic.And I can't thank all the staff enough, who work at the hospital even though the infection risk is high.And I can't thank all the staff enough, who work at the hospital even though the risk of infection is high.And to all the staff who work at the hospital, even though the risk of infection is high, I can't thank you enough.0 votedMay 10, 20202
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