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Troubled abroad We went to Sydney Airport to go to Ayers Rock. l missed my flight at the Sydney airport. At that time, the response of the ground staff was cold. We called you on the air. Grand staff said, I was told that you shouldn't have noticed. We didn't know what to do after this. What was my checked baggage? Can I take the next flight? I was upset because it was the first time I missed an airplane overseas. I contacted a Japanese travel agency and told them how to deal with it. As a result, I decided to stay at a hotel near the airport that day, and decided to fly to Ayers Rock the next day.

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Troubled abroad [Could also title it 'Trouble abroad' - let me know if you want more information about the difference between 'troubled abroad' and 'trouble abroad']

We went to Sydney Airport to go to Ayers Rock.
l missed my flight at the Sydney Airport.
At that time [more natural: 'At the time'], the response of the ground staff [more natural: 'the response from the ground staff' or 'the ground staff's response'] was cold. "We called you on the air," ground staff said, I was told that you shouldn't have noticed [This doesn't make sense. Do you mean 'I was told but I didn't notice.'?].

We didn't know what to do after this. Where was my checked baggage? Could I take the next flight? I was upset because it was the first time I had missed an airplane [more natural: 'missed a flight'] overseas. I contacted a Japanese travel agency and told them how to deal with it [Do you mean 'they told me how to deal with it.'?]. As a result, I decided to stay at a hotel near the airport that day, and decided to fly to Ayers Rock the next day [the second 'decided' is not needed].

Great work! Sorry you had a rough time!
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Troubled abroad

We went to Sydney Airport to go to Ayers Rock.
l missed my flight at the Sydney airport.
Sounds ok, but would sound better to combine. Was it just you or with multiple people? Either:
We went to the Sydney Airport to go to Ayers Rock, but we missed our flight.
I went to the Sydney Airport to go to Ayers Rock, but I missed my flight.

At that time, the response of the ground staff was cold.
The response of the ground crew was cold.
The response of the staff was cold.

We called you on the air.
They said, "We called you on the intercom"
They said, "We called you on the speaker"

Grand staff said, I was told that you shouldn't have noticed.
The manager said, "I was told you should have heard the announcement."
The manager said, "I was told you should've heard the announcement."
The manager said, "You should've heard the announcement."

We didn't know what to do after this.

What was my checked baggage?
Where was my checked baggage?
Where was my checked luggage?

Can I take the next flight?

I was upset because it was the first time I missed an airplane overseas.
I was upset because it was the first time I had missed a flight overseas.
I was upset since it was the first time I'd missed a flight overseas.

I contacted a Japanese travel agency and told them how to deal with it.
I contacted a Japanese travel agency and asked them to deal with it.

As a result, I decided to stay at a hotel near the airport that day, and decided to fly to Ayers Rock the next day.
As a result, I decided to stay at a hotel near the airport that day and to fly to Ayers Rock the next day.
As a result, I decided to stay the night at a hotel near the airport and to fly to Ayers Rock the next day.

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