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●AI will rob people of many jobs.
●When teaching we cannot rely on textbooks, we have to be more creative and pursue better methods.
●As long as you master English, it doesn’t matter what methods you use.
●I’m not sure when we will be able to return to normal life.
●The picture of a penguin on the small ice implies that ice polar is becoming smaller by global warming.
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●AI will rob people of many jobs.
This doesn't sound bad, but here are some other ways:
AI will rob many people of their jobs.
AI will rob humanity of many jobs.
AI will rob society of many jobs.
AI will rob the economy of many jobs.
●When teaching we cannot rely on textbooks, we have to be more creative and pursue better methods.
This may be a "run-on" sentence - I would split into two. Otherwise, the wording is OK. I also wrote another version of the 2nd part that sounds a bit more professional.
When teaching, we cannot rely on textbooks. We have to be more creative and pursue better methods.
When teaching, we cannot rely on textbooks. We must be creative and pursue more effective methods.
●As long as you master English, it doesn’t matter what methods you use.
Perfect!
●I’m not sure when we will be able to return to normal life.
Perfect!
●The picture of a penguin on the small ice implies that ice polar is becoming smaller by global warming.
There are some special wordings that are commonly used for ice - see the below versions:
This picture of a penguin on a small block of ice implies that the polar ice caps are shrinking due to global warming.
This photo of a penguin on a small chunk of ice shows that the polar ice caps are melting because of global warming.
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●When teaching we cannot rely on textbooks, we have to be more creative and pursue better methods.
As Taylor noted, this is a run-on sentence. More specifically, it is a special type of run-on sentence called a comma splice. In addition to splitting it into two separate sentences, you can also use a semicolon as follows:
When teaching we cannot rely on textbooks; we have to be more creative and pursue better methods.
More information is in this article:
https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/grammar/runonsentences#s-lg-box-2825908
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