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<s>Mis problemas con el futuro </s>My future problems

I'll begin my <s>universitari's</s> university studies next year and I have to <s>take</s> make the biggest decision in my life. <s>I want to say if beggining studyng nurse or psychology</s>. I cannot decide if I want to study Psychology or nursing. I'm going to go to Madrid and I'm sure of this because I like big cities. I'm going to look for a shared flat in the city centre.

I hope that I'll find good friends at the university. I'm going to study hard because I want to pass all of my exams <s>and then I'll have a free </s>and have the whole summer free.

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A day <s>of vocation</s> during vacation.

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My favorite festival

Before the festival occurs, I am very excited. It is good opportunity to get together with my family and share our happiness amongst each other. My favorite festival is Mid-autumn festival. I eat mooncake and it is very delicious. The moon looks so bright and big. We can appreciate it and play cards on the balcony.

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I need help

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The story of my journey to journalism

Ever since I can remember, I read and wrote. I was born in a Kurdish village in the South East of Turkey. I was a lucky child because my parents always answered my questions. One of the questions I remember was about the universe and the history of humankind. I was about four years old and I had a strong willingness to listen to the stories of the people around me, especially my father’s. Since then, I have never stopped questioning, and doing that became an important part of me. That’s how and when I started to be a researcher; when I realised I was born to do it. I also took photos. We had a small camera that had 32 shots. I took photos of my family; my grandparents, the people of our village, the animals. I was so glad that my father was letting me use his camera as I was a small kid. Back then we were living in Karakoçan, a district of Elazığ. Almost every few months we used to visit my grandparents in the village where I was born, Conag. When we went there I took photos of the landscapes, even the smoke that was coming from the burned villages. It normally takes an hour from Karakoçan to Conag by minibus but those days it took three to six hours because of checkpoints. The soldiers checked our bags, foods, our jackets, shoes, almost everything. It was hardest for me, for all of us, when the checked our camera. They asked a lot of questions about the camera and the films inside. My photos. They took the films out, and they told my father to not use it again. This went on for years. My father didn’t listen to them and they kept taking our films away. I knew I was becoming a reporter but I didn’t know that I was going to be a war reporter. I was born in an area where people are dying for peace. If I can’t write about it, as I am a witness to it, the world will never know about us. The more we write, the more you learn. My people need you to hear more. I really do want the world to hear more about our struggles. I want to take my notes to the world. Since it is impossible to do it in Turkey and I live in the UK, will you please give me the chance to do it here?

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