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Correct sentences please 1.My kettle doesn`t work a week after buying. Don`t worry if you checked a receipt you can call for after sales service and get a full refund. 2. I am so afraid of credit card fraud that I pay just by cash. This is the safest method of payment. 3. If it`s possible to get interest-free credit, I would buy a car immeditely. But in our case banks want to leave a lot of procent money to themselves. 4. Can you despatch this parcel to my friend? I am so busy this week but she has been waiting for it for a long time. 5. It`s unbelievable but I was ripped off when I bought a coffe in a new coffee shop. 6.When she doesn`t have money she has window shopping. She isn`t shopaholik but she likes lovely staff(things,items). 7. How often do you go to the book shop? 8.Do you go to baker`s in the morning when they have fresh bread and cookies? 9.I know that retail price is much more expensive than wholesale but where should I keep goods if I buy them? I don`t have a warehouse. 10.It`s the best to wait for cut-price goods or sales instead of spending a lot of money for the same things.

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Correct sentences please

1.My kettle stopped working a week after I bought it. Don`t worry if you kept the receipt you can call for after sales service and get a full refund.
2. I am so afraid of credit card fraud that I just pay by cash. This is the safest method of payment.
3. If it`s possible to get interest-free credit, I would buy a car immediately. But in our case banks want to charge a lot of interest for themselves.
4. Can you despatch this parcel to my friend? I am so busy this week but she has been waiting for it for a long time.
5. It`s unbelievable but I was ripped off when I bought a coffee in a (the) new coffee shop. (a or the depends on whether I know which coffee shop you are talking about)
6.When she doesn`t have money she goes window shopping. She isn`t a shopaholic but she likes lovely stuff(things,items).
7. How often do you go to the book shop?
8.Do you go to baker`s in the morning when they have fresh bread and cookies?
9.I know that the retail price is much more expensive than the wholesale but where should I keep goods if I buy them? I don`t have a warehouse.
10.It`s best to wait for cut-price goods or sales instead of spending a lot of money on the same things.

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Correct these sentences please

1. My kettle broke one week after buying it. I am not worried because if you check the receipt it says you can call the after-sales service and get a full refund. 
2. I am so afraid of credit card fraud that I only pay by cash. This is the safest method of payment. 
3. If it`s possible to get interest-free credit, I would immediately buy a car, but in our case banks want to keep a large percentage of money for themselves. 
4. Can you despatch this parcel to my friend? I am so busy this week and she has been waiting for it for a long time. 
5. It`s unbelievable, but I was ripped off when I bought a coffee at a new coffee shop. 
6.When she doesn`t have any money she has to do window shopping. She isn`t a shopaholic but she likes nice things. 
7. How often do you go to the bookshop? 
8. Do you go to the bakery in the morning when they have fresh bread and cookies? 
9. I know that retail price is much more expensive than wholesale but where should I keep goods if I buy them? I don`t have a warehouse. 
10. It`s best to wait for cut-price goods or sales instead of spending a lot of money on the same things.

Hello Helena. I hope you are well. I hope my correction of your text was useful.

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Lee Burrows

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