A day of vocation
The essay is to introduce a daily of winter vocation.
In the vocation,I often get up at eleven am,and go to sleep at nine pm. It is not good for my health to often stay night. I spent much time on playing phone. A lot homework
is needed to do,and I'm anxious about that. So I decided to change this situation,for becoming better myself.
Change is a difficulty thing,often needing more effort for to do it. I believe myself.
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Hello Qiqi. Please see below my correction of your text. I hope it helps.
A day of vocation during vacation.
The aim of this essay is to discuss a day during winter vacation. During vacation, I often wake up at eleven am and go to bed at nine pm. It is not good for my health to stay up late often. I spend a lot of time playing on my phone. I also have a lot of homework to do and I am anxious about that. I have decided to improve this situation, to become a better version of myself. Change is difficult and often requires a lot of effort, but I believe in myself.
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