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My Favorite Festival Before festival comes, I will be very excited. It is good opportunity to get together with my families, and share our happiness each other. My favorite festival is Mid-autumn festival. I can eat mooncake, and it is very delicious. The moon looks so bright and big. We can appreciate it and play cards in the balcony.

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My favorite festival

Before the festival occurs, I am very excited. It is good opportunity to get together with my family and share our happiness amongst each other. My favorite festival is Mid-autumn festival. I eat mooncake and it is very delicious. The moon looks so bright and big. We can appreciate it and play cards on the balcony.
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My Favorite Festival

Before a festival comes, I will be feel very excited. It is a good opportunity to get together with my families, and share our happiness with each other. My favorite festival is the Mid-autumn festival. I can eat mooncake: and it is very delicious. The moon looks so bright and big. We can appreciate it and play cards in the balcony.

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