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    请帮我修改一下

    目前,世界环境污染很严重，这使人类，动植物，自然环境都遭到危害。
    环境污染主要表现在:
    第一是水污染。造成水污染的最重要原因是企业把大量工业废水和石油排入河流和海洋。这不仅使水不能再使用，而且还污染了海洋生态环境，这导致许多种类的动植物消失；
    第二是空气污染。工业生产是大气污染的主要来源，但汽车尾气，森林火灾，燃烧煤炭也会对空气造成污染。
    第三是垃圾污染。这因城市垃圾没有好好处理，没有分类收集造成的。
    为了解决环境污染问题，应该在各领域都采取措施。我认为，这是全球各国共同的责任。国家需要加强企业工业生产的控制和管理，减少污染物的排放，发展污水处理和垃圾分类，有效利用能源，提倡企业和社会参与保护环境的活动等。
    除了国家政策以外，社会公民也应为保护环境做出贡献: 节约水电，处理垃圾，少用一次性塑料的产品，不乱伐树木等。
    总之，地球是我们人类的家园。如果我们保护自然，自然就保护我们。

    your chinese is great
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    October 24, 2019
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    October 23, 2019
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    translation The Chinese traditional way for terating require a variety of food, making sure the guest feeling the food being enough. The typical menu include a set of cool food and hot food such as meat, chicken and vegetable behind in the cool food in china. in a sea of banquets, unless various of seafood have been provided,it is regared necessity that a whole fish.
    September 17, 2019
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    June 28, 2019
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    June 21, 2019
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    今天的天气还好，一整早上下小雨，下午天气变成更好

    今天天气还好，早上一直下小雨。到了下午天气变的挺不错的，晚上我们去了散步，享受着月光，感觉好舒服啊！（很是惬意。）

    上个月我们种了花，其中只有两朵花长大了，所以我去网上查找关于怎么让它们成长的方法。

    我刚才在看书，上个星期在图书馆我借了三个书，我很喜欢在晚上这种很安静的环境下看书。

    昨天我想，如果父母很喜欢看书，他们的小孩是否也会喜欢，哈哈，我猜这取决于小孩。

    昨天在散步的时候，我们看到多只猫咪，它们玩地很开心，玩完它们躺在树荫下，好可爱哦！
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    June 21, 2019
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    Please check my introduction~

    Good morning!
    It is my great honor to have this opportunity for this interview.
    My name is Peggy.
    I come from XX University, is the major of Teaching Chinese As the Foreign Language, I am a senior student.这句话你是想做一个插入语对吧？但是你句子中有两个动词发现了吗？come from 和 is 和am，逗号还是算一个句子，一个句子，没有从句的话只能有一个动词。
    In my university life, I found this major is very helpful and important. And I am change my mind from curiosity to fancy it so much.（这个中间应该不是平行关系吧，so , thus , hence,你市想说从好奇到喜欢？？一般不用fancy, ）
    In my learning life, this major make very huge influence for me. “Chinese teacher” is a very strange name for me, but in this three year, I learn it more, and I think in the future, I also can be a very excellent Chinese teacher. (动词应该用单三吧，makes,大的影响很少说huge, great, exceedingly, more 比较好)

    In order to become a best Chinese teacher, I think that we should do these things as follow: First, we must have a strong base for Chinese knowledge and Chinese international culture knowledge. Second, we should make ourselves more patience, and have good interpersonal communication skills. Third, have a proficiency foreign language.
    The role of Chinese teacher have the responsible for spread the Chinese culture, to reduce the stereotype of Chinese culture for foreigners. And I am so admire to become the teacher like that, contribute myself to the team of the Chinese teachers.
    Hopefully I’ve made myself clear to you. Thank you for your listening. And I think I’m ready for the next part.
    Thank you.

    我现在有点事，回头在改吧，姐，你四级过了吗？你这个语法哦，我也是学生，相互帮助，相互学习。。。。。
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    June 21, 2019
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    June 21, 2019
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    a dream from the old dream when I was a young child, I has studied English at the first time. I find that I not suit to learn the language. when l was a under-graduated, I find that English is very important for every students, so I want to improve my English. you can't image the difficulty, the grammars, vocabularies and pronunciation like a big mountain. I make a flag that I will write a short essay everyday in this web.
    June 20, 2019
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    今天上班，一整天都很忙，特别是下午。很多客户给公司打电话，而且我还要参加会议。好在下班之前可以完成最重要的东西，放松地回家，还能享受看日落的美景！

    今天我的工作一整天都很忙，特别是在下雨的时候，很多客户打电话给公司，而且参加项目会议 。好在下班之前可以完成最重要的东西，所以放松地回家，享受看日落的美景！

    上个月在超市我们看到两个小孩，他们非常调皮，突然我们听到他们的妈妈骂他们，我猜她看他孩子做了什么不好的东西，哈哈，有时候小孩很有趣！

    因为我刚才忙着清洁（整理/打扫）一个房间，所以我觉得有点累了，好在现在可以休息一下。

    我刚才忙着情节一个房间，因此我觉得有点累了，幸好现在可以休息一下。

    今天我们看到天气预报，天气预报说明天的天气不是很好，下雨或多云，但是今天的天气很棒！

    今天我们看到天气预报，他们说明天的天气会不很好， 大多是会下雨和有多云，只是今天的天气很棒！
    I am glad to revise your article. Chinese tends to emphasize the meaning rather than the grammatical rules. So when you speak Chinese, you should try to avoid  your English mindset.
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    June 20, 2019
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