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Please check my introduction~ Good morning! It is my great honor to have this opportunity for this interview. My name is Peggy. I come from XX University, is the major of Teaching Chinese As the Foreign Language, I am a senior student. In my university life, I found this major is very helpful and important. And I am change my mind from curiosity to fancy it so much. In my learning life, this major make very huge influence for me. “Chinese teacher” is a very strange name for me, but in this three year, I learn it more, and I think in the future, I also can be a very excellent Chinese teacher. In order to become a best Chinese teacher, I think that we should do these things as follow: First, we must have a strong base for Chinese knowledge and Chinese international culture knowledge. Second, we should make ourselves more patience, and have good interpersonal communication skills. Third, have a proficiency foreign language. The role of Chinese teacher have the responsible for spread the Chinese culture, to reduce the stereotype of Chinese culture for foreigners. And I am so admire to become the teacher like that, contribute myself to the team of the Chinese teachers. Hopefully I’ve made myself clear to you. Thank you for your listening. And I think I’m ready for the next part. Thank you.

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Second, we should make ourselves exercise more patience, and have good interpersonal communication skills.

Third and not least , we must have a proficiency in a foreign language. (or ..., we must be proficient in a foreign language)

I believe the role of a Chinese teacher have the is not only to teach our language, but we are also responsible for spreading our the Chinese culture, to reduce the stereotype stereotyping of Chinese our culture for by foreigners. And I am so admire inspired to become the a teacher like that , and to contribute myself give my best efforts to the team of the professional Chinese teachers.

Hopefully I’ve made myself clear to you (its correct but the tone is not so nice, can sound like a boss talking to employee :) ) I hope from this short introduction, I have let you understand a little about myself and my values as a Chinese teacher. Thank you for your listening. And I think (deleting "think" sounds more confident) I’m ready and eager for the next part (or ... eager to start this journey) . Thank you for your listening.

Thank you.

Good Luck Peggy :)
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Please check my introduction~

Good morning!
It is my great honor to have this opportunity for this interview.

My name is Peggy and I come from XX University , is the . My major of is Teaching Chinese As the A Foreign Language, and I am a senior student (I made this sentence shorter so it is smoother to read). In my university life, I found this major is very helpful and important. And I am change my mind from curiosity to fancy it so much. ("fancy" is ok when taking with friends but I feel is not so suitable for formal interview) . It has changed my mind from just curiosity in the beginning, to a very deep interest in my area of study.

In my learning life, this major make very huge influence for me has been a huge influence on me (or ... has made a huge impact on me). “Chinese teacher” is at first seemed like a very strange name title for me, but in this these last three years, I learn it more learnt so much and this has changed my view , and . I think in the future, I also can will also be a very an excellent Chinese teacher in the future. (or : I am confident, I will make an excellent Chinese teacher in the future)

In order to become a the best Chinese teacher, I think : that we should : do these things as follow (because it is oral interview and not written, I suggest just delete "follows"):

First, we must have a strong base for Chinese knowledge and Chinese international culture knowledge.

Italki does not allow me to post the correction in one go so I need to split into two
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Please check my introduction~

Good morning!
It is my great honor to have this opportunity for this interview.
My name is Peggy.
I come from XX University, is the major of Teaching Chinese As the Foreign Language, I am a senior student.这句话你是想做一个插入语对吧?但是你句子中有两个动词发现了吗?come from 和 is 和am,逗号还是算一个句子,一个句子,没有从句的话只能有一个动词。
In my university life, I found this major is very helpful and important. And I am change my mind from curiosity to fancy it so much.(这个中间应该不是平行关系吧,so , thus , hence,你市想说从好奇到喜欢??一般不用fancy, )
In my learning life, this major make very huge influence for me. “Chinese teacher” is a very strange name for me, but in this three year, I learn it more, and I think in the future, I also can be a very excellent Chinese teacher. (动词应该用单三吧,makes,大的影响很少说huge, great, exceedingly, more 比较好)

In order to become a best Chinese teacher, I think that we should do these things as follow: First, we must have a strong base for Chinese knowledge and Chinese international culture knowledge. Second, we should make ourselves more patience, and have good interpersonal communication skills. Third, have a proficiency foreign language.
The role of Chinese teacher have the responsible for spread the Chinese culture, to reduce the stereotype of Chinese culture for foreigners. And I am so admire to become the teacher like that, contribute myself to the team of the Chinese teachers.
Hopefully I’ve made myself clear to you. Thank you for your listening. And I think I’m ready for the next part.
Thank you.

我现在有点事,回头在改吧,姐,你四级过了吗?你这个语法哦,我也是学生,相互帮助,相互学习。。。。。
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姐,你们语法错误有点多呀。。。
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Hope there have somebody could help to check my English grammer, or teach me some more advanced expression methods. Thank you very much!

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