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    Deer collision <em>(deer</em>-vehicle <em>collision or Dear Deer)</em>

    My friends and I went on a trip to northern Michigan last weekend. There are (were) vast forests, (and) so we (really) hoped (that) we could (find) some wild animals such as deer. (Actually we did) heard a lot about (deer-vehicle collision) <s>when driving</s>, but, (of course),we did (hope to find them) alive (rather then dead) !

    I think one of the most fortunate things happened to (us) (was) that <s>this time</s>, our car was (once) so close to a deer, but (there was not collision). At that time (moment), I was sitting in front <s>passenger seat</s>, texting to my friends. When I <s>had</s> just finished (the last) text, I <s>raised my head and</s> saw a deer passed by. I swear, it was just one centimeter (more) that we (would) hit the deer. I was scared, (but) I was also very happy that the deer didn't die in front of my eyes.

    I met another friend two days ago, (although) she and her friends (also visited) Northern Michigan they were not as lucky as me. Their car hit a fawn in the morning, which made them (to) feel (upset for the whole day). I understand that most of the roads (were re-counted) as expressways- having a 55 mph speed limit- thus making it very hard to avoid (any) animal (that is getting close suddenly). Anyway, I sincerely hope that people can find ways to reduce (minimize this kind of incident).

    In my opinion the story is quite hard to express, I appreciate how you try to express your experience in detail. With a lengthy story like this, you can extend your paragraph and use more precise words to express your feelings.
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    March 6, 2020
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    All the way up~ Translation attempt...

    suggestion 1

    (没有人可以）停（止）我的了，我在最上。
    在最上了。
    我在最上了。
    我在最上了。
    (没有人可以）停（止）我的了，我在最上。

    这个汉子对不对？谢谢为帮助我的。

    suggestion 2

    我在最高处 (on top) = I am all the way up (more common than 最上)
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    March 6, 2020
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    March 6, 2020
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    English advisor wanted

    In the (contemporary) world,it is (significant for young people) to learn English well. Now, the student union of our college (is inviting) an international student to be English advisior.

    (Here) are some details:
    First,we need someone whose native lanuge is English and is (fluent in Chinese)
    Second,to be an english advisior it means that you are responsible for helping student to partice English, answer their question and organizing activities.
    Finally,the advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.

    Are you interested? If you want to join us please feel free to contact Li Hua at 1330088776889

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    March 6, 2020
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    August 21, 2019
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    Family gathering (looking for suggestion, THX) Family gathering Family is not simply a set of household practices, it is an emotional tie between members. Family members may gather to have fun, a party allows the entire family to share valuable times together while letting the children play with each other. The Chinese practice of dinning helps to embrace solidarity of a family, for example, consuming a big fish is meant to embrace the togetherness of a family. In Hong Kong, the most common leisure activities are eating-out and going to a tea house (饮茶) with family. With a busy schedule, people in Hong Kong usually join activities together, therefore having a family gathering in a restaurant is just very common. Do these activities ever contribute to the quality of family relation and family wellbeing?
    July 9, 2019
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    July 9, 2019
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    我現在學注音。

    我現在學注音。
    注音難。
    但是、學習很好玩。（verbal: 好玩儿）（formal: 有樂趣）

    Now I’m learning 注音.
    注音 is difficult.
    But studying is fun.
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    July 1, 2019
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    hi, you are writing quite good, the major concern is the order of Chinese sentence is opposite to English ones.

    明信片去我好朋友 (给我好友的名信片）

    湖区

    这个夏天我去了苏格兰（到苏格兰去了）。Argyll 省。Argyll 没有很多人（的人不多），本地人很友好人。人（们）（都）非常喜欢讨论！😊 有时候我听不懂他们说什么；有时候他们听不懂我说什么！😄 但是。。。没问题 （问题不大）！

    有一天我去了Bute岛，我看见“苏格兰女王玛丽“ (1500‘s) 的家：一个大家或者一个小城堡。又红色，又漂亮，又（古）老。几个人还住在那！（还有几个人住在那）

    今天我（住）在湖区。明天我（就/便）回家。

    The Lake District

    This summer I went to Scotland. Argyll. Argyll does not have many people. The locals are very friendly. Some of the people love to talk! Sometimes I can't understand what they say; sometimes they can't understand what I say! But... it's fine!

    One day I went to the island of Bute. I saw Mary Queen of Scots (1500's)'s house: a large house, or a small castle. It was red, beautiful, and very old. Some people still live there!

    Today I will stay one night in the Lake District. Tomorrow I will return home.
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    July 1, 2019
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    An indelible experience (part 1)

    My flight (trip) to New York was really <s>an</s> indelible <s>experience</s>. When I arrived at the Chicago airport, I received an email and also a text (+message) telling (informing) me (that) my flight was (has) delayed for about one (an) hour. I thought <s>ok, it </s>(+that) was fine, but I didn't predict (couldn't imagine) that the flight would be delayed more than one times (once). Almost 3 hours later (has passed), I (was) finally boarded (on) the plane, but once I sat down, the Captain broadcasted that we need to wait for one more hour to take off (announced for another delay for the take off). Well, I slept for one hour on the plane, but when I woke up, I waited for another 40 minutes (I slept for an hour and woke up, but the plan was still there, and it actually took 40 more minutes to go).

    At that time (In that moment), I thought it was acceptable as long as the plane took off, but I never expected that the plane would land on Philadelphia (+which is thousand miles from New York !). Because of the bad (poor) weather in New York, the plane (flight) was delayed again and again. ( It was really a disaster which I have...) spent more time than usual in the upper air and (+have) landed in another city, <s>which really seemed like a disaster</s>.

    TBC :)

    Hi

    This is not a grammatical correction, I only tried to turn verbal language into written language so it sounds more formal. The blot words are not replacement, they are just alternatives :)
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    June 30, 2019
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