明信片去我好朋友
湖区
这个夏天我去了苏格兰。Argyll 省。Argyll 没有很多人。本地人很友好人。几个人非常喜欢讨论！😊 有时候我听不懂他们说什么；有时候他们听不懂我说什么！😄 但是。。。没问题！
有一天我去了Bute岛。我看见了“苏格兰女王玛丽“ (1500‘s) 的家：一个大家或者一个小城堡。又红色，又漂亮，又很老。几个人还住在那！
今天我是一宿在湖区。明天我回家。
The Lake District
This summer I went to Scotland. Argyll. Argyll does not have many people. The locals are very friendly. Some of the people love to talk! Sometimes I can't understand what they say; sometimes they can't understand what I say! But... it's fine!
One day I went to the island of Bute. I saw Mary Queen of Scots (1500's)'s house: a large house, or a small castle. It was red, beautiful, and very old. Some people still live there!
Today I will stay one night in the Lake District. Tomorrow I will return home.
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致好友的明信片
这个夏天我去了苏格兰的阿盖尔郡。阿盖尔的人口不多，当地人很友好，有些酷爱聊天！有时我听不懂他们在说什么，有时他们也不理解我想表达什么。不过，这些都还好！
一天，我去了布特岛，看见了苏格兰玛丽女王生前的居所（公元16世纪）—— 一栋很大的房子，或者说一座小型的城堡，红色、美丽、古老。至今仍有人住在那里！
今天在湖区住一晚，明天就回家。
（某月某日于湖区）
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hi, you are writing quite good, the major concern is the order of Chinese sentence is opposite to English ones.
明信片去我好朋友 (给我好友的名信片）
湖区
这个夏天我去了苏格兰（到苏格兰去了）。Argyll 省。Argyll 没有很多人（的人不多），本地人很友好人。人（们）（都）非常喜欢讨论！😊 有时候我听不懂他们说什么；有时候他们听不懂我说什么！😄 但是。。。没问题 （问题不大）！
有一天我去了Bute岛，我看见“苏格兰女王玛丽“ (1500‘s) 的家：一个大家或者一个小城堡。又红色，又漂亮，又（古）老。几个人还住在那！（还有几个人住在那）
今天我（住）在湖区。明天我（就/便）回家。
The Lake District
This summer I went to Scotland. Argyll. Argyll does not have many people. The locals are very friendly. Some of the people love to talk! Sometimes I can't understand what they say; sometimes they can't understand what I say! But... it's fine!
One day I went to the island of Bute. I saw Mary Queen of Scots (1500's)'s house: a large house, or a small castle. It was red, beautiful, and very old. Some people still live there!
Today I will stay one night in the Lake District. Tomorrow I will return home.
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What a charming place! You must had enjoyed a awesome journey.
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