CELPIP writting part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions Both options have their advantages, and I can see why part of my colleague would choose Option A. However, if I had to choose one, there are several reasons why Option B would be my preference. Firstly, I like to have a full weekend to take a rest. I usually get up late on Saturday morning, I think most of the people like me. Furthermore, if we had training sessions on Saturday, we only have 1 and half days for these weekends. We wounld not have enough time to have a trip on these weekends. Secondly, even though Option B needs a longer period to finish it, we only need to have 2-hour class per week. The classes end at 8:30 pm, so we stll have time to go home before 10 pm. I think it is not to late for me, and I still can have time to sleep and take a rest for the next day’s working. So for the reasons that I have outlined, I feel Option B is a better choice.

CELPIP writting part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions Both options have their advantages, and I can see why part of my colleague would choose Option A. However, if I had to choose one, there are several reasons why Option B would be my preference. Firstly, I like to have a full weekend to take a rest. I usually get up late on Saturday morning, I think most of the people like me. Furthermore, if we had training sessions on Saturday, we only have 1 and half days for these weekends. It is hard to have a short-term trip on these weekends. Secondly, even though Option B needs 12 weeks to finish, we only need to have 2-hour class per week. The classes end at 8:30 pm, so we still have time to go home before 10 pm. I think it is not too late for me, and I still can have time to take a good rest for tomorrow’s working. On the whole, these are the reasons why I think Option B is a better choice.

CELPIP writting part 1 - Writing an Email Dear Sir or Madam I am Tim and I am one of the members of ABC hospital. Recently, we hold a project for the children who have serious illness, such as cancer or rare ill. You might notice there are a few advertisements posted on the hospital’s wall. This project will help these children and their family get better treatments. Because kids are not like an adult can express their need and feeling clearly, they need specialists to help them and diagnose them. Furthermore, we also need to buy some equipment to create this special department. For now, it is estimated that we need one million dollars for this project. We grantee that we will reveal all the money we got and list in our announcement. Besides, you can see the monthly expense list on our website. If you are interested in this project, you can directly donate cash in the reception desk or transfer to the specific account. We will give you the receipt within 7 business day. Thank you Tim

CELPIP writting part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions Both options have their advantages, and I can see why some of my colleges might choose Option A. On the whole, however, there are several reasons why Option B would be my preference. For one thing, if the company arranged for transportations, everybody would arrive on time and nobody would get lost. At past training sessions, some people who travelled on their own were late. This caused the people who arrived on time to become frustrated while waiting for them. If everyone takes the same transportation, then no one needs to wait. For another thing, if people knew they do not have to drive themselves, they can more relax. For those people who drive their own cars to the training session might not be able to concentrate, because they need to worry about when to leave and how to avoid traffic jam after the session finished. As a result, arranging transportations would help us more focus on the training. Finally, if the company arranges transportation for everyone, people can chat with each other on the way to and from the session.

CELPIP writting part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions Both options have their advantages, and I can see why some of my colleagues might choose Option A. On the whole, however, there are several reasons why Option B would be my preference. Firstly, it might be true that higher salaries are more attractive to hire new employees. Most of the people, including me, are more concern about salaries than benefit. Because money is a very realistic condition, people usually think about it first. Furthermore, it also can make new stuff work harder when they know their salaries will rise. Secondly, I think money is more flexible than the vacation. When we on a busy season, we are hard to take a personal leave. Even though we have an extra two days of vacation, we might not have time to use it. In contrast, if we don’t have annual leave, we still can take non-paid leave. As a result, I would rather have more money in advance. So as far as I am concerned, Option A is the better choice.

CELPIP writting part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions Both options have their advantages, and I can see why some of my colleagues might choose Option A. On the whole, however, there are several reasons why Option B would be my preference. Firstly, some training courses might not suitable to do online. For example, the course that is talking about safety would need to demonstrate emergency pathes and some equipment. The most important is practicing these by their own. As a result, it can help people to realize what to do in the urgent situation. Secondly, I think traditional classes cannot be replaceable. I heard some colleague response that the part of classes are too simple to learn. In traditional classes, the teacher can receive the feedback instantly and modify their class depends on the reaction. Furthermore, students are easier to communicate in classes. These can make us learn and study more efficiently. So as far as I concerned, I think Option B is the better choice.

CELPIP writting part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions Both options have some advantages, and I can see why some of the students might choose Option B. On the whole, however, there are several reasons why Option A would be my preference. For one thing, a new computer center can help students who can not afford to buy a computer. The computer is more and more important for our study, but there are still some students have big financial pressure to buy a computer or afford the internet cost. It is good for those to do their homework or print out documents for free at school. For the other thing, I do not think a shopping area can survive in a small college too long. Even though building a shopping area may save students and teachers’ time to buy food or some materials, the college may not have enough customer to buy stuff. These stores may bankrupt within five years. As a result, I think the school should not invest money in a short-term plan. So as far as I concerned, Option A is the better choice.