CELPIP writting part 1 - Writing an Email
Dear Sir or Madam
I am Tim and I am one of the members of ABC hospital. Recently, we hold a project for the children who have serious illness, such as cancer or rare ill. You might notice there are a few advertisements posted on the hospital’s wall.
This project will help these children and their family get better treatments. Because kids are not like an adult can express their need and feeling clearly, they need specialists to help them and diagnose them. Furthermore, we also need to buy some equipment to create this special department. For now, it is estimated that we need one million dollars for this project.
We grantee that we will reveal all the money we got and list in our announcement. Besides, you can see the monthly expense list on our website. If you are interested in this project, you can directly donate cash in the reception desk or transfer to the specific account. We will give you the receipt within 7 business day.
Thank you
Tim
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CELPIP Writing Part 1 - Writing an Email
Dear Sir or Madam,I am Tim and I am one of the staff of ABC hospital. Recently, we started a project for the children who have serious illness, such as cancer or rare diseases. You might notice there are a few advertisements posted on the hospital’s wall.
This project will help these children and their family get better treatments. Because kids are not like an adult who can express their needs and feelings clearly, they need specialists to help them and diagnose them. Furthermore, we also need to buy some equipment to create this special department. For now, it is estimated that we need one million dollars for this project.
We grantee that we will reveal all the money we get and list it in an announcement. Besides, you can see the monthly expense list on our website. If you are interested in this project, you can directly donate cash at the reception desk or transfer to the specific account. We will give you the receipt within 7 business days.
Thank you
Tim
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