CELPIP writting part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions
Both options have their advantages, and I can see why some of my colleges might choose Option A. On the whole, however, there are several reasons why Option B would be my preference.
For one thing, if the company arranged for transportations, everybody would arrive on time and nobody would get lost. At past training sessions, some people who travelled on their own were late. This caused the people who arrived on time to become frustrated while waiting for them. If everyone takes the same transportation, then no one needs to wait.
For another thing, if people knew they do not have to drive themselves, they can more relax. For those people who drive their own cars to the training session might not be able to concentrate, because they need to worry about when to leave and how to avoid traffic jam after the session finished. As a result, arranging transportations would help us more focus on the training.
Finally, if the company arranges transportation for everyone, people can chat with each other on the way to and from the session.
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CELPIP writing part 2 - Responding to Survey Questions
Both options have their advantages, and I can see why some of my colleagues might choose Option A. On the whole, however, there are several reasons why Option B would be my preference.For one thing, if the company arranged for transportation, everybody would arrive on time and nobody would get lost. At past training sessions, some people who travelled on their own were late. This caused the people who arrived on time to become frustrated while waiting for them. If everyone takes the same transportation, then no one needs to wait.
For another thing, if people know they do not have to drive themselves, they can feel more relaxed. For those people who drive their own cars, to the training session, might not be able to concentrate, because they need to worry about when to leave and how to avoid the traffic jam after the session has finished. As a result, arranging transportation would help us be more focus on the training.
Finally, if the company arranges transportation for everyone, people can chat with each other on the way to and from the session.
Good writing, Kim! Yes, you made good persuasive arguments about arranged transportation. All the best.
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