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- A good day I have a great day today. In the morning, I went to volunteer. After volunteering, I went exercise. After exercising, I contacted with my family and relatives! That was quite precious as all the family and relatives rarely gather together! Regardless whether there were bad things that has happened today, my mood was lifted and I was filled with more hope after talking to my family and relatives! :) Apart from the fact that I am physically healthy today, I should keep listening to calm music and videos to keep my mind peaceful and calm.December 2, 201730
啊，今天下了很大的雪
啊，今天下了很大的雪雪下得很大(1)，我们里面在屋子裡、坐在沙发上和、看到了著外面的雪，很舒服！可是我等一會兒(2)需要去工作，所以我穿了很多的衣服，因为我不喜欢感觉冷的感觉(3)，哈哈。现在我们刚刚去了外面，下很大的雪下的很大，也太冷啦！所以我们里面跑得快很快地跑回屋內(4)，哈哈哈哈，很有趣啊(1)we say 雪下得很大 instead of 很大的雪
(2)I assume you haven't gone to work yet so I add '等一會兒' meaning 'later'
I do so as I thought you are going to work but later on you say you went out and it was too cold and you came back in.
(3)不喜欢 is a verb already so rather than 感觉冷, we say 冷的感觉
(4)we say 跑回里面 rather than 里面跑得快
I think the main thing in this note is trying to think in Chinese grammar :) I guess you are still using English grammar~~ Hope this helps~~
0 votedNovember 30, 20170请大家修改错误。
在这张照片中， 有是大字母 “C” 和 、地球。 还有以及数字 “2”。这张照片的意思是人类都忘了我们只有一个家。我的想像里这个 “C”，在我看來， 彷彿是要把地球差不多吃了一样。CO2表示污染。我们以为它地球很大。 什么都承受得了。但我怕，按照这张照片，事实并不是如此。(1)也是这样：大概只有在电影裡我们才有机会可以找到可以替代地球的星球来居住吧!(2)只有在电影里我們才有别的”地球“可以搬家。所以我们必须结束减少污染、爱护地球。(1) I am not quite sure whether I corrected into the meaning you want. What I mean here is that 'from this photo, it does not seem that the earth can bear this pollution'
事实并不是如此 means 'it is not true'
(2)I put '只有在电影里我們才有别的”地球“可以搬家' before '我们必须结束污染'. In this way, I mean that 'because it is only possible to have a second Earth in movie, we'd better reduce pollution and save the Earth'. (this English translation is based on the corrected Chinese I made)
Hope this helps~~
0 votedNovember 30, 20170- Volunteer training session Today I went to second last volunteer training session. Today it was mainly former Syrian refugees telling us about Syria, including its culture, their life in Syria, what the situation is at the moment for refugees, and their own experience of settling down in New Zealand with the help of Red Cross. Interestingly, in Syria, education is free from primary school to university(apparently including post graduate programme!). Health service is also free. The girl also showed us a video of heritages and natural views in Syria. I have to say Syria looks really beautiful and modern! If I have a chance, I might want to travel there! Anyways, this session was pretty chill today and refugees will arrive in Dunedin soon next week! Finger cross! Hope things will go well.November 30, 201700
他们怎么认识？怎么分手？
他们怎么认识的？
其实他们见面的故事很感动。他们是在同一的城市长大的。他们以前是真正的很要好的朋友(1)，一起笑，一起哭，也有很多共同的爱好。 有一天他跟她告白了，於是他们就在一起了。但过了两年，他突然爱上了别的女生。这让她特别伤心。她开始讨厌他，然后发现这个东西她不会改变但之后她发现他不会因此而改变(2)，于是她选择分手，选择原谅了他。这就是他们分手的原因。(1)I change it into '很要好' which means 'very close' friend-->not sure whether you mean that or not
(2)I change into the highlighted part, which means that 'she realised that the guy wouldn't change'-->not sure whether you mean that OR you mean 'hating him did not change anything'(他发觉讨厌他并不能改变任何事）
0 votedNovember 29, 20170
