Hair salon season

In October, several salons have bargain season, thus I usually choose thise this timing time for ("for" is correct but "get" is more precise) to get my hair coloring colored and perming permed (short for permanent) as well as hair care. Many Ascians Asians like me, are born with straight thin hair, however, this kind of hair looks flat and too collapsed as the climante weather/climate is wet humid in Taiwan.

I like big waved curved hair that is easy for set (not sure about this), and looks spirited (haven't seen this adjective in use).

En México: Bueno?

Please help me to correct the Happy Moon Festival Wish

The following content is a Happy Moon Festival Wish, including in both Chinese and English, which I wrote several weeks ago. However, I don’t know whether (<-- nice use of whether here) the English that I use is right (not wrong but correct is better choice here) correct or not. So, please help me to correct them (plural) if having it should have I made any mistakes. Thank you.


一年月色最明夜，千里人心共賞時。
The brightest full-moon night, the 15th day of the 8th month of the lunar calendar, is enjoyed by everyone around the world.

一陣子不見，近來你一切都順利嗎？
We have been out of touch too long. What have you been up to lately?

話說回來，
Anyway,

雖然人生不相見，但彼此相望的卻是同樣的月亮。
Although having been unable to meet each other, we all both ("all" is correct, but I suppose you are talking about two people, so "both") can admire the beauty of the same moon.

而我也拿著酒詢問天老爺，這皎潔月光已出現多少次了呢？
With a cup glass (cup = 茶杯) of wine, I ask the blue sky, ‘How many times will the full moon rise?’

只能藉著天上一輪 明月，請徐徐晚風把我的祝福帶給你。
Gentle breeze would give all my best blessing to you via the bright moon on the sky.

希望我思念的你能夠一切圓滿，
I wish you a joyful and successful life.

即使天各一方，也能共享這美好的月夜。
Even though far apart, we are still able to share the enchanting moon together.

（離別一何久，幾度過中秋，
海上生明月，天涯共此時，
明月幾時有？把酒問青天，
但願人長久，千里共嬋娟。）

祝你 中秋節快樂！
The Moon Festival is coming. I wish you a happy Mid-Autumn Festival!

Do violent video games cause the mass of encourage/promote violence?

After horribly violent murders, an increasing number of people have been desensitized (desensitised, also correct) to violence and seek violence as a way of entertaining themselves .
In my perspective ,it's a low rate chance for that a person to would murder others due to playing the violent video games. (alternative wording: In my perspective, it is not likely that playing violent video games encourage people to commit murder.)

I mean that people who like to play these games because there are feature fancy pictures (pictures are usually taken with a camera) images, exciting stories and interacting interactive models (probably: environments?), not the reason is not for violent plots ,bloody and scary scenes. Many people just want to (reduce thier their pressure = relax) and obtain self-achievement from the internet .
But However, why there are more and more people blaming violent video games ? One thing that I can suppose is that they don't distinguish whether (whether is usually used when the only choices are yes or no) between addiction or converting characters (I didn't got what you meant here).  (((Parents allow their children to sit in front of the computer and play various video games))) They are afraid that their children may to learn bed bad things from violent games so they try their best to forbid impede/stop/prevent the dessemination dissemination of violent games. Actually, we all know that personal character personality will not easily change by external factors.
I think the optimum age to start playing violent games is over 23 years old.Because we have enough discerning ability, knowing that games just help us relax ourselves after work. So in common (I don't know what you intended to express here) ,the emerging violent murders emerging is are (plural) a social problem , which are is (singular) not caused by violent games only.