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Do violent video games cause the mass of violence? After horribly violent murders, an increasing number of people desensitized to violence and seek violence as a way of entertaining themselves . In my perspective ,it's a low rate for a person to murder others due to play the violent games. I mean that people who like to play these games because there are fancy pictures , exciting stories and interacting models , not the reason for violent plots ,bloody and scary scenes. Many people just want to reduce thier pressure and obtain self-achievement from the internet . But why there are more and more people blaming violent video games ? One thing that I can suppose that they don't distinguish whether addiction or converting characters. Parents see their children sitting in front of the computer who wallow in various games. They afraid their children to learn bed things from violent games so they try best to forbid the dessemination of violent games. Actually we all know that personal character will not easily change by external factors. I think the optimum age to start playing violent games is over 23 years old.Because we have enough discerning ability knowing that games just relax ourselves after work. So in common ,the violent murders emerging is a social problem , which are not caused by violent games only.

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Do violent video games cause the mass of encourage/promote violence?

After horribly violent murders, an increasing number of people have been desensitized (desensitised, also correct) to violence and seek violence as a way of entertaining themselves .
In my perspective ,it's a low rate chance for that a person to would murder others due to playing the violent video games. (alternative wording: In my perspective, it is not likely that playing violent video games encourage people to commit murder.)

I mean that people who like to play these games because there are feature fancy pictures (pictures are usually taken with a camera) images, exciting stories and interacting interactive models (probably: environments?), not the reason is not for violent plots ,bloody and scary scenes. Many people just want to (reduce thier their pressure = relax) and obtain self-achievement from the internet .
But However, why there are more and more people blaming violent video games ? One thing that I can suppose is that they don't distinguish whether (whether is usually used when the only choices are yes or no) between addiction or converting characters (I didn't got what you meant here).  (((Parents allow their children to sit in front of the computer and play various video games))) They are afraid that their children may to learn bed bad things from violent games so they try their best to forbid impede/stop/prevent the dessemination dissemination of violent games. Actually, we all know that personal character personality will not easily change by external factors.
I think the optimum age to start playing violent games is over 23 years old.Because we have enough discerning ability, knowing that games just help us relax ourselves after work. So in common (I don't know what you intended to express here) ,the emerging violent murders emerging is are (plural) a social problem , which are is (singular) not caused by violent games only.

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Interesting writing! I agree with you

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