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- Resigning from Professional Dancing: Developing Teaching AbilityPrior to becoming a dance instructor, I had a few opportunities, like providing a warm-up class for dancers, to hone my teaching skills . However, after resigning, I finally had a chance to teach formally at various institutions. As a full-time instructor, I had to plan a syllabus for each semester and then implement each section of it accordingly throughout the term. Not until I started teaching did I realize that dancing and teaching are entirely different.In essence, this teaching experience was an opportune time to utilize my left-brain tendencies, particularly, my analytical ability. Simply put, I was able to dissect the entirety of my dance experience and classify each part into manageable steps that I could integrate into cumulative lesson plans. In addition to demonstrating dance movements, I also had to articulate what I was doing and why. Then, I would observe students’ dance and then provide them with guidance. Throughout years of teaching, I accumulated a myriad of lesson plans for various subjects and gradually refined my pedagogical skills, which I would later apply to my soul-dance teaching.0 votedJune 26, 20191
Feminine identity is based on the self-awareness of a female body (part 1)
There are lots of people debating about the topic of feminine identity, most of all is surrounding the rise of feminism or upgrading the social position of women in a male leading society.
As a woman, I am more concerned about whether if I truly know my female body: what does she need? What feelings does she feel? Do I allow my body to present herself in a natural way? Am I willing to give her the right to express herself freely so that I can hear her true voice?
To be continued…
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"Correction from my English tutor:
Feminine identity has become the topic of many fierce and opinionated debates, particularly the notion of feminism in terms of social mobility--within a patriarchal society.
As a woman, I am cautious about objectifying my own body, I am careful to ask, concerning my body, “What does ‘she’ need? What are ‘her’ feelings? Do I allow ‘her’ to embrace the fullness of feminine sovereignty? Do I allow ‘her’ freedom of expression?”
ps, thank you, my tutor, Anthony! ^_^0 votedMarch 7, 20190Life and Travel
* I like to visit a diverse city where I can sense different vibes of various activities.
* I don't mind to experience bustling nightlife, but if I have to choose, I prefer to stay home.
* You can always discover things that are out of your imagination in bazaars.
* In the Chinese tea ceremony, you are served with a quaint ritual.--------------------
Hello, Sundari! I only had time to offer suggestions about the first two points. Here's how you can include sensory language in your writing:<o:p></o:p>
*The windows of my soul glistening with the pulsing of the neon lights, my heart racing with every beat of the local rhythmic tune, and my taste buds tingling with every morsel of a region’s traditional cuisine are all experiences I live for when I venture into a new land, among a new people. <o:p></o:p>
*I don’t mind partaking in a city’s bustling nightlife, but usually I choose to pass up on bumping into droves of mindless drunk people and being tortured by the melody of overplayed billboard hits for a quiet evening at home, ravenously flipping through a new bestseller. <o:p></o:p>
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