Feminine identity is based on the self-awareness of a female body (part 2)
As a little girl, I grew up under the care of my parents who gave me full of freedom, which has enabled me to explore life in my own way. My parents seldom restricted me to behave like a woman under social mobility. I deeply appreciated my parents for allowing my natural way of self-expression.
I have doubted my feminine identity while in an intimate relationship, which was all because I was too concerned about how people valued me. When I was working as a professional dancer, I have often treated my physical body as merely a means of presenting dance. I had a high sensory awareness of my body that I could control it to perform delicate dance skills, however, I seldom viewed it in the form of a female body.
After going through the process, I finally realized that how I value myself is much more important than how others and society value me. I would never ever abuse my body without listening to “her” feeling.
I would like to propose my comprehension to the women like you, when you allow your body to express in ‘her’ own way, immediately, you will gain joyful feedback from ‘her’. The more you honor your feminine body, understand ‘her’ need, recognize ‘her’ natural move, the more will you become an authentic woman. There is no need to guise or cover up the essence of the wild feminine in you, as ‘she’ will make your life full of creation and aliveness.
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Feminine identity is based on the self-awareness of a female body (part 2)
As a little girl, I grew up under the care of my parents who gave me full of freedom, which has enabled me to explore life in my own way. My parents seldom restricted my behavior and allowed me to behave like a woman despite social constraints. I deeply appreciated my parents for allowing me to behave naturally.I have doubted my feminine identity before, while in an intimate relationship. This was all because I was too concerned about how people thought of me. When I was working as a professional dancer, I have often treated my physical body as merely a means of presenting dance. I had such a high sensory awareness of my body that I could make it perform delicate dance moves; however, I seldom viewed it in the form of a female body.
After going through this process, I finally realized that how I viewed myself is much more important than how others and society view me. I would never ever abuse my body without listening to “her” feeling.
I would like to offer my understanding of this phenomenon to the women like you. When you allow your body to express herself in ‘her’ own way, you will immediately gain joyful feedback from ‘her’. The more you honor your feminine body, understand ‘her’ needs and recognize ‘her’ natural moves, the more authentic of a woman you will become. There is no need to disguise or cover up the essence of the wild femininity in you, as ‘she’ will make your life full of creation and vigor.
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NOTE: Excellent work! Wonderful insight as well as writing.
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Dear Anthony, I am grateful that you have been helping me a lot with my English writing. And yes, what you said is exactly what I wanted to convey in my writing. Looking forward to having the next session with you soon. ^^
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Sorry about the session ending abruptly, Sundari! Sometimes, the sessions end automatically.
I definitely see a ton of improvement! Be sure to use clear topic sentences within each paragraph. In reality, a topic sentence can be anywhere within a paragraph, but for now, I encourage you to write it at the beginning of each.
Overall, remember that the theme is how you strive to define femininity in a self-actualizing way but often, subconsciously, find yourself accepting a brand of femininity that has been propagated by a male-dominant society.
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