Life and Travel

Life and Travel

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Hello, Sundari! I only had time to offer suggestions about the first two points. Here's how you can include sensory language in your writing:

*The windows of my soul glistening with the pulsing of the neon lights, my heart racing with every beat of the local rhythmic tune, and my taste buds tingling with every morsel of a region’s traditional cuisine are all experiences I live for when I venture into a new land, among a new people.

*I don’t mind partaking in a city’s bustling nightlife, but usually I choose to pass up on bumping into droves of mindless drunk people and being tortured by the melody of overplayed billboard hits for a quiet evening at home, ravenously flipping through a new bestseller. 

Life and Travel

Because your used "diverse" it implies multiple cities. So I changed it to plural. There are different nuances, if you want to ask me, please do.

* I don't mind to experiencing a bustling nightlife, but if I have to choose, I prefer to stay home. 

The gerund (动词 "experiencing") and the infinitive (不定式 "to experience") are very similar in meaning. It's really hard to know which to use in English. These websites might help: https://www.ecenglish.com/learnenglish/lessons/gerund-vs-infinitive-practice or https://www.fluentu.com/blog/english/gerunds-and-infinitives/

* You can always discover things that are out of your imagination in bazaars. 

This sounds very interesting! In other words, by seeing the different crafts and foods and different kinds of people . . .?

* In the Chinese tea ceremony, you are served with in a quaint ritual. 

"In" works better. Also, there might be better words than "quaint."  Sometimes, the word "quaint" suggests "old fashioned" and not always in a good way. ("Oh, that dress she's wearing . . . it's quaint")