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Through the internet, social media, newspaper..., the opinions of celebrities are widely spread and can affect almost every person. However, based on the observations in of everyday life, I do agree with the statement that they seem more important to young people than they are to older people. The two following reasons are discussed to further elaborate upon my thoughts.
The first
reason why I consider this way is that, while older people have more life experience
on their own,
young people are still learning how the world works. Thus, their thoughts are more easily
shaped than older people. Young people tend to imitate those whom they look up to, such as famous singers, athletes, statesman, etc. Take my best friend, for example, one of her favorite basketball player
s encourages teenagers to follow their heart
s and pursue their dream
s. She then decided to
study major in life science
as major instead of becoming a doctor,
which is what her parents wanted her to do. It
is the athlete
that influence
s one of her most important
decision in life.
In addition to
the reason aforementioned
reasons above, young people also
gain information from social media more commonly than the elderly. Therefore, the opinions of celebrities could be spread quickly among young people, and even be commented or discussed. As a result, there is an
amplification effect on those opinions, which deeply influences how young people think. For instance, if a celebrity posts his
/ or her opinion on Facebook
or Instagram, it
could be shared
for over hundreds of thousands of times! In this way,
hardly can young people not be affected by these messages
with such frequent appearance on social media.
To sum up In sum, as far as I'm concerned, younger people consider the opinions of well-known celebrities more
importantly since their
more flexible mind, as well as their more frequent access to social media.