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Nonsense Chinese poetry Different from traditional poetry, which has strict requirements on rhythm and number of words, modern Chinese poetry is more causal and thus funny. Nonsense poetry (废话诗) brought to public view by poet Wu Qing raised a debate on poetry in 2012. Many criticized publishing his poems was a waste of papers, while many followers believed his artworks revealed the essence of nature. As a reader, I do enjoy his poems. Let me introduce two nonsense poems to you. BTW, please forgive my poor translation :) 《向一只猫要一支烟》 ---|| Title: Ask a cat for a cigarette 没有把握 -------------------------|| Not confident 只是试试 -------------------------|| Just tried to 向一只猫要一支烟 -----------|| Ask a cat for a cigarette 就这样 -----------------------------|| As following 他问一只猫 ----------------------|| He asked a cat 有没有烟? ----------------------|| "Have a smoke?" 猫跳下桌子躲到了沙发底 || Cat jumped down from table then hid under the sofa 他搬开沙发 ----------------------|| He moved the sofa aside 对猫说了句谢谢 ---------------|| Thanks, he said to the cat 《关于一个人》 --------------|| Title: Being solitary 我现在是一个人 --------------|| I am solitary now 真的是一个人 ------------------|| Only myself, seriously 在这个房间的外面 -----------|| Outside of this room 有70多亿人 ----------------------|| There are more than 7 billion

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Nonsense Chinese Poetry  (Capitalize all main words in a title)

Different from traditional poetry, which has strict requirements on rhythm and number of words, modern Chinese poetry is more causal  (do you mean casual?) and thus, funny. Nonsense poetry (废话诗) brought to public view by poet, Wu Qing, raised a debate on poetry in 2012. Many criticized argued that publishing his poems was a waste of papers, while many followers believed his artworks revealed the essence of nature. As a reader, I do enjoy his poems. Let me introduce two nonsense poems to you. BTW, please forgive my poor translation :)

(paper and artwork are non-count nouns in this case.)

Using Google translate, I corrected your translations.  Not sure if mine are right. Capitalize all the main words in a title.)

《向一只猫要一支烟》 ---|| Title: Ask a Cat for a Cigarette  To a  Cat To a Cigarette  ???
没有把握 -------------------------|| Not confident   No guarantee  ???
只是试试 -------------------------|| Just tried to Just try it out
向一只猫要一支烟 -----------|| Ask a cat for a cigarette   To a cat to a cigarette  ???
就这样 -----------------------------|| As following That's It
他问一只猫 ----------------------|| He asked a cat
有没有烟? ----------------------|| "Have a smoke?"  There is no smoke   ???
猫跳下桌子躲到了沙发底 || The cat jumped down from table, then hid under the sofa
他搬开沙发 ----------------------|| He moved the sofa aside
对猫说了句谢谢 ---------------|| "Thanks," he said to the cat   Thank you for the cat  ???


《关于一个人》 --------------|| Title: Being Solitary    About a Person   ????
我现在是一个人 --------------|| I am solitary now    I am now a man
真的是一个人 ------------------|| Only myself, seriously   Really is a person  ???


在这个房间的外面 -----------|| Outside of this room
有70多亿人 ----------------------|| There are more than 7 billion million (people)


I think in most cases, Google Translate missed the mark. Thanks for sharing.  I enjoyed the poems.


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“Nonsense” Chinese Poetry

In contrast to traditional poetry, which has strict requirements on for rhythm and word count (不说这个专业词的话,该改成 the number of words on each line/in the poem), modern Chinese poetry is more casual and thus funny (Are more casual poems necessarily funny?) . “Nonsense poetry” (废话诗), brought to public view by poet Wu Qing, raised a (推荐你多形容一下是什么样的debate,可以说是national debate 吗?)national debate on poetry in 2012. Many criticized that publishing his poems was a waste of paper (mass noun), while many of his followers believed his artworks revealed the true (true essence 是个规定词语,不知道为什么) essence of nature. As a reader, I personally do enjoy his poems. Let me introduce two nonsense poems to you. BTW, please forgive my poor translation :)

《向一只猫要一支烟》 ---|| Title: Asking a cat for a cigarette
没有把握 -------------------------|| Not confident,
只是试试 -------------------------|| A man/He (需要主语) just tried to
向一只猫要一支烟 -----------|| Ask a cat for a cigarette.
就这样 -----------------------------|| Just like this
他问一只猫 ----------------------|| He asked the cat
有没有烟? ----------------------|| "Do you have a cigarrate?"
猫跳下桌子躲到了沙发底 || The cat jumped down from the table and hid under the sofa.
他搬开沙发 ----------------------|| He moved the sofa aside.
对猫说了句谢谢 ---------------|| Thanks, he said to the cat.


《关于一个人》 --------------|| Title: Being solitary
我现在是一个人 --------------|| I am solitary now
真的是一个人 ------------------|| Only myself, seriously
在这个房间的外面 -----------|| Outside of this room
有70多亿人 ----------------------|| There are more than 7 billion people

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Really interesting! Thanks for sharing!

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Yeah, you can imagine how messy his life is.
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It's funny how the cat guides him to the cigarette.

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