没有很看懂你想表达的东西，比如“原子机器的标签例子”？“出厂日期的密码”？ 另外“此致敬礼”相当正式，而且一般是这样写的： 此致 (blank)敬礼 所以如果没有那么那么的正式，一般就用“祝您工作顺利”即可

我决定我想要变化改掉自己的坏习惯。

1. 最近我发现我多次做不太有利的事情，使我浪费很长时间。2. 几天前，我买了一门叫”The ultimate morning routine(我觉得这是它的名字，我忘了哈哈)的课，因为我决定我不想继续做自己的改掉之前的坏习惯。 3. 两天之前的晚上我早一点儿(9:00pm)从学校到家里， 我经常通常晚上10pm点左右到家里。4.  所以因为那天我没有事情我去房间睡觉。真不巧我两个小时之后睡醒了，虽然我真想再次睡觉但是下一天早上6点才能睡觉(I cannot understand)。 当我起床了的时候我感觉有点失望，我差点放弃变化改变我的坏习惯。 因为每次我去学校我要花两个小时左右，所以我继续看之前提到的那门课的视频。 我一边听到好的建议一边在本子上写。以前我经常到很晚玩英雄联盟到很晚，然后才开始做作业，我写完了作业的时候就睡觉。一般来说我起床的时间是中午，然后我洗澡，、吃午饭，、去学校。 基本上那是我的一个普通的通常的一天。 对我来说早点起床难的很早起很难。 但是今天我早上我8点就起床了，我知道这只是第一天，但是我感觉很激动，我认为我走了一个大的脚步至少往前迈了一大步，。让我坚持下去。我希望自己能完成其他的目标，比如说每天都早点起床，复习汉语，。5. 有一口标准的汉语，跟中国人像一样，。我希望有一天能当作老师 (如果我在中国我想当作西班牙语老师，如果我在别的国家我想当作汉语老师) 对了有人想练习西班牙语和汉语的话就通知我，我想帮你们！！！！ 谢谢大家

1. 最近我发现我常把时间浪费在不值得的事情上。

2. In Chinese, we usually introduce context, reasons before we say the important thing, before we say our main idea, which is different from what it is in English. So it could be changed to: “为了改掉我之前的坏习惯，几天前我买了一门叫...的课”， or "因为我决定改掉之前的坏习惯，所以几天前我买了一门叫..的课”，but it's ok if you do not want to change, your sentence is still understandable.

3. 两天之前的晚上我九点就从学校到家里了，我通常晚上10点左右到家里

or  两天之前的晚上我到家早了些，九点就到了，而通常我十点左右才到家。

4. 所以因为那天我没有事情，我提前去房间里睡觉

it is still not so formal because you use “so, because”at the same position...it is a little bit strange..you could change to:

正好那天没什么事，我提前睡了觉。 

5. 希望能和（像/跟）中国人一样有一口标准的汉语 (same as 2)

Postcard to my boyfriend

Qīn'àide Stefan!

wǒ zài huālián yígè xīngqī, 5.hé wǒ hěn xǐhuan wŏ ài zhèlĭ.
1. Zhè gōngzuò sùshè bùshì tài nán le, 2. hé wǒ yǒu hěnduō shíjiān tànsuŏ dìqū. 3. Wǒ yǐjīng zuòle túbùlǚxíng zài Taroko, zhè shì hěn měile.
Wǒ shènzhì kāishǐ xué zhōngwén.
4. Wǒ xīwàng nǐ shēntǐjiànkāng.

Ài nǐ!
Sigrid

notes: I use 1,2,3,4 to represent the note on pinyin, e.g.: hànyǔ (ha4nyu3), yīqiè(yi1qie4)

1. hostel: I am not sure about the meaning of this word, is it the dormitory, or hotel, or..? cause when we say  sùshè we mean dormitory. If you want to express: the work in the dormitory is not so hard, then it should be: 宿舍的工作不是太难 -- su4she4 de go1ngzuo4 bu2shi4 ta4ina2n

2. it is a little bit strange here to add "hé", and it would be better to change the sentence to: "wǒ yǒu hěnduō shíjiān tànsuŏ zhe4ge4 dìqū 我有很多实践探索这个地区", I add a preposition here, which is "this area" 

3. Wǒ yǐjīng zuòle túbùlǚxíng zài Taroko, zhè shì hěn měile. The sequence  of a sentence between English and Chinese is different. so you should say: "Wǒ zài Taroko túbùlǚxíng, Taroko zhe1nde hěn měile.我在太鲁阁徒步旅行，太鲁阁真的很美丽 " if translated to English literally, it shoule be: I  hiked in Taroko, and Taroko is really beautiful. We do not have attributive clause in Chinese. Also, you could say: I hiked in Taroko, this is really beautiful. Then it changed to: Wǒ zài Taroko túbùlǚxíng, zhe4li3 zhe1nde hěn měile 我在太鲁阁徒步旅行，这里真的很美丽。

Also, usually people do not know English name of a place, so it would be better to know its Chinese name as well:  Taroko 太鲁阁 Tàilǔgé

4. Wǒ xīwàng nǐ shēntǐjiànkāng. The sentence means I hope you have a good health. So if you indeed mean it, you could use it. However, if you mean I hope everything goes well, you should say: Wǒ xīwàng nǐ yi2qie4shu4nli4 我希望你一切顺利。

5. hé is right here, but it would be better to change to another word, which has the same meaning with it: bi4ngqie3 --并且

Chinese Words of The Week 25/9/17 (1)

可以 = can; may
Kěyǐ (kéyǐ)
存 = to exist; live; survive
Cún
吃 = to eat
Chī
喝 = to drink
Hē
是 = to be
Shì
去 = to go
Qù
说话 = to speak; talk; say; chat
Shuō huà
懂 = to understand
Dōng  dǒng
认识 = to know; understand; recognize
Rènshi
看 = to see; look at; watch
Kàn

我们都可以进来吗？= Can we call come in?
Wǒmen dōu kěyǐ jìnlái ma?

上帝存在吗？= Does god exist?
Shàngdì cúnzài ma?

你喜欢吃面条吗？ = Do you like to eat noodles?
Nǐ xǐhuān chī miàntiáo ma?

我不喜欢喝红酒， 但我喜欢喝啤酒 = I don’t like drinking wine, but I do like drinking beer。
Wǒ bù xǐhuān hē hóngjiǔ, dàn wǒ xǐhuān hē píjiǔ.

我的妻子是上班的老板 = My wife is the boss at work.
Wǒ de qīzi shì shàngbān de lǎobǎn

This sentence is not clear... I am not sure what you are trying to express. You mean: your wife is your boss when you work? Then it should be" 我的妻子在工作上是我的老板” 

他们想去看电影 = They want to go to the cinema
Tāmen xiǎng qù kàn diànyǐng

我只懂一点汉语 = I only understand a little Chinese
Wǒ zhǐ dǒng yīdiǎn hànyǔ (wó zhí dǒng yìdiǎn hànyǔ)

(if there are multiple characters with the third tone how do they tones change?)
我你认识市长马吗？ = Do you know the mayor?
Wǒnǐrènshi shìzhǎng ma?

(is 认识 only used in the context if knowing people?)

it could be know other things 

e.g. 1. know characters /words/ letters -- 认识字/词语/字母

2. ask one person:" did you know it/sth. ? -- use especially when other people think it is likely that the person saw or knew it before.  It could also be translated as: "Have you seen sth. before?"

e.g.  when a man is in police office, the police asks:" did you know the computer?" -- 你认识这个电脑吗？under the condition that the police thought perhaps the person went to the venue before or in other condition and he saw the computer.

3. 认识到（意识到）-- realize

e.g. realize the importance of protecting environment -- 认识到保护环境的重要性

我很喜欢看书 = I really like reading books
Wǒ hěn xǐhuān kàn shū (wó hén xǐhuān kàn shū)

Chinese Words of the week (1)

觉 Jué = to feel
做 zuò = to do; make; produce
止 zhǐ = to stop
今年 jīnnián = this year
才 caícái = ability; talent; a moment ago; only just
只 zhǐ = only
最近 zuìjìn = recently; lately; in the near future; soon
从来不 cóngláibù = never
住 zhù = to love; reside; stay; stop
学习 = to study; learn; emulate

我觉得冷。 = I feel cold.
Wǒ jué de lěng.

他高兴地做。 = He does it happily
Tā gāoxìng de zuò.

他们不能止住火车。 = They can’t stop the train!
Tāmen bù néng zhǐ zhù huǒchē!

我今年开始学汉语。 = This year I started learning Chinese.
Wǒ jīnnián hāishǐ xué hànyǔ.

我刚才起床。 = I just got out of bed.
Wǒ gāngcaícái qǐchuáng

我有两只猫了，但有一人只死亡 = I had two cats, but one died.
Wǒ yǒu liǎng zhī māo, dàn yǒu yīrén zhī sǐwáng.

他的母亲最近好吗？ = How is your his mother?
Tā de mǔqin zuìjìn hǎo ma?

我从来不是有钱人。 = I have never been rich.
Wǒ cónglái bù shì yǒu qián rén.

我住在英国北部 = I live in the north of England.
Wǒ zhù zài yīngguó běibù.

我也在学西班牙语。 I am studying Spanish too.
Wǒyě zàixué xībānyá yǔ.

昨天的辩论

昨天我跟医生讨论是否应该跟小孩子睡在一起。医生的主观 观点是这是件很危险的事情，小孩子会因缺氧而死。可是我不能赞成他的主张，我针对所有的妈妈会理解自己的宝贝，千万不使他受到伤害。

This could also be changed to:

医生的主观 观点是这是很危险的事情

可是我不能赞成他的主张

This sentence is correct, but the phrase "主张” is too formal to put it here. I tend to use "观点”，“想法”，etc.

and usually we say "disagree", rather than "cannot agree" in Chinese.

so the whole sentence could be "可是我不赞同（or 不赞成）他的观点。”

我针对所有的妈妈会理解自己的宝贝

I am not sure what are you trying to express in this sentence. So I change it to: I think every mother would focus on their children, which is: 我认为所有妈妈都会关注他们的孩子/宝贝