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watching music videos I prefer watching music videos to listening to music on their own. Watching music videos allow me to appreciate those dancing with music as well as those interesting stories in them. quick music with dancing makes the music full of moving sense, soft music with dancing makes the music full of emotion. Besides, from those interesting stories in videos, I am able to learn how to organize and narrate a story well in both plots and ways to show it, as editing videos is one of my hobbies.

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watching music videos

I prefer watching music videos to listening to music on their its own. Watching music videos allows me to appreciate those dancing with music as well as those the interesting stories in them. Quick music with dancing makes the music full of moving sense movement, soft music with dancing makes the music full of emotion. Besides, From those  the interesting stories in videos, I am able to learn how to organize and narrate a story well in both plots and ways to show it expression, as editing videos is one of my hobbies.

This is a great start! I would like to help you with your grammar and spelling. I think we could have very productive and educational lessons together. If you want to book a lesson, you can click on my profile and set one up.

Thank you,

Emily 

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watching music videos

I prefer watching music videos to listening to the music on its own. Watching music videos allows me to appreciate those dancing to the music as well as their interesting stories. Quick music with dancing makes the music full of dynamic sense, soft music with dancing makes the music full of emotion. Besides the videos' interesting stories, I know how to organize and narrate a story well in both plots and ways to show it, as editing videos is one of my hobbies.

Very well written!

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