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Litte Little clumsiness story
I'm a clumsy person. I always remember that when I went out with my third boyfriend. He took me to a very elegant restaurant in his hometown. He ordered a bottle of red wine from Australia. The wine shows was a nice deep ruby red color. The red wine was just and was right next to me. When we were In the middle of a conversation, I accidentally knocked the bottle of red wine over. The red wine is It spilled all over the white tablecloth. I have This ruined our date. And the worst part was is we have had to pay a fine to the restaurant for destroying the tablecloth. Not to mention (You could also say something like, This would not be the first time, ...) that I've smashed a lot of glasses in my life. Another very humiliating thing that ever happened to me is was when I was a teenager. I walked out to the toilet, I and didn't notice that there iswas a stair, so I fell over. As a result, all both of my wrists were brocken broken. They had out of shape were misshapen . I also hit my knee. Because My wrists were hurt to the point where I lost consciousness. I knocked out. This accident affected me a lot. I stayed in the hospital for one week and I had 5 months off school. My parents had to wash me. I can't was not able to bathe have a bath on my own. What is even worse is that my parents had to use the toilet paper on my bottom. I don't what kind of accident will happen to my in the future, but I hope the worst has passed.I am sorry about your accident :( That would greatly affect anyone.
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0 votedSeptember 11, 20170An invented story about a match
Hi everyone. I have just invented a story to practice some new words and expressions.He was never fond to get up of waking up at the crack of dawn, but when his alarm clock went off at 4am that day, he woke up and put the light on in next to no time. The match had been brought forward at the last minute and he wanted to arrive at the stadium in good time. He didn't like the people who turned showed up late and then made up some excuses about being held up by the traffic or something like that. He set his heart on (maybe add a verb of some sort, say something like "he set his heart on being a part of the team" his team and wanted all his teammates to do the same. When After he had his breakfast, he was already looking ahead forward to the match. The fact that the match had been brought forward (maybe try something like "changed to an earlier time") had really messed up his plan for the day, but he couldn't care less about the other things he had to do. If all went according to plan, today they his team will win the championship. But something went wrong that day. When he arrived at the stadium, he found out that the match had been called off due to bad weather.
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0 votedSeptember 11, 20171Television
Most of people are watching television everyday.
Why do we watch television?
We can get information of from around the world by television, and we can be made laugh by entertainment program. an entertainment program can give us a good laugh.
A Television is the a life partner.
We can watch anime, news, sports, entertainment, and history by television.
And Most of these programs were made to be not not be turned off on the way. (What do you mean here?)
Television is a very interesting things but we should be carefully to not watch too much.
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0 votedSeptember 11, 20171In the following article I would like to give my opinion, if on whether or not I think advertisements encourages us to buy items that we do not need or if they inform us about items that are helpful in daily life.
First of all, I would say that all advertisements are produced to sell a thing something. Whether it is necessary or not, it is the same this is always the goal. Therefore, you can imagine that a lot of people are buying things that they will never use. But They will argue that it is important for this a certain situation, which was descriptive most likely was described in the commercial. This has occurred in my personal experience with a *Like the kitchen aid Kitchen-Aid I bought many years ago. The ad promised that cooking and baking will would be fun, because you do not have to do anything. In the end I didn't have fun and so I never used the device again. This is just an one example and there would have been several more. out of several others.(Add a space between paragraph or at least add an indentation to your new paragraph)
The other On the other hand, the argument that advertisements represent new things that will change your life is also true. Because All the companies are telling that they have claiming to sell the best product and say it will change your future in a way. What they do not say is, if your life will be positive changed positively or if there is will just be less money in your wallet, because the item you bought is just a waste of money. due to the uselessness of the item you just bought.
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0 votedSeptember 5, 20174Will you please point out and explain errors in this text?
The factory XXX is located in Russia and produces baby food for the Russian market. The This (Is "the" referring to baby food?) weakened the Russian economy and rapidly changed the marketplace, which in turn has a direct impact on company’s sales. Thus, during the this period of economic and political uncertainty in Russia, it *was very important to incorporate scenario-based planning and econometric modeling to identify the potential impact of changes conditions. During the planning process, I identify the economic indicators that impact the baby food business. and In addition to this, I also build a financial model to establish a historical relationship between organizational performance and economic indicators. By analyzing the rippling effects of the different versions of a weakened Russian economy, I can identify contingency plans and tactical, operational solutions.*is this preset or past tense? If it is present, change "was" for "is"
Note: In general, the tense changes in this paragraph. I can take a second look at it if you tell me what tense you would like it to be.
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0 votedSeptember 5, 20170Today
Hi everybody./! I want to tell them would like to tell them (who is them?) that I was practicing English with a friend, but I think he started the school. I hope to meet somebody who I can practice it with soon, if it is not so, I will forget what I learned. Today I was going to make some payments at the bank and then I am going to do a homework, because I am studying software development online. The university where I am studying is UnADM. After, I am going to go for my work. I want to tell them that in Mexico it has been raining a lot, everyday it has been like this. I hope the weather is better next week. By last Lastly, I am going to watch the match between Costa Rica and Mexico, I hope Mexico wins 2 to 0.
I want to tell you that I am a beginner practicing English and I did not use a Google Translate to write this entry. Regards everybody. Thank you.Awesome work! I hope these corrections help. I would love to help you practice your English speaking and writing skills through italki so you do not forget them. Feel free to book a trial session with me. :)
0 votedSeptember 5, 20171i need someone correct this letter to me
Dear Mr.Dio EMANUEL Mr. Dio Emanual *INSTITUEs director,*skip a line before starting the first paragraph
We hope you in best condition I hope you are well. Regarding to our previous request to start new level (level 5) the new level 5 class, from this year in this season, we I would like to inform you that we are still awaiting impatiently your response. to initiate in proceed with this class, As you know, it is difficult here in Djibouti to find a school or institute which teach this that offers a course at this level. and We are looking to improve our English language fluency, we know that you have looked for and are looking to you to help us find a suitable teacher. with this level, we hope you could find someone, Please try to do the impossible for us.
We really truly appreciate you for all your effort and all Emanuel institute stuff in supporting all of us, the Emanuel Institute staff, in learning English. We hope to hear from you soon.
Sincerely the student who graduated from level four,
Ghaleb Alarifi*What institute? Once addressed the greeting should read,
"Dear Mr. Dio Emanual, the institute director of _________________________-, "
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0 votedSeptember 5, 20170The Brazilian that wishs who wishes to speak English fluency fluently.
He lives in Sergipe, a state of the northeast of the Brazil. He likes a lot of the songs in English. This is the mos hobby (please explain more) and he even craied when he heard it. He wishes to understand the lyrics. Then He decided to learn English so he could understand the lyrics. But it wasn´t easy. He wasn´t intelligent. He watched movies, read several book series and history, but still did not understand enough. Day by day he became more traumatized, the more he tried the less he learned. He eventually stopped with the songs. This situation led him to give up on learning. But on the other hand, he come back to hear (?), he come back to enjoy without opression. Then, he started to read books about the songs, watch generals films with songs. sudernly Suddenly, he met an American people person on in the supermarket. They started to talking about songs. when he less holpe (?), he was talking in English.....then, he was very happy for a good surprise!!! This surprise made him very happy.Please contact me if you have any further questions, I would be happy to help! :)
0 votedSeptember 5, 20172
