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The brazilian that wishs speak English fluency He lives in Sergipe, a state of the northeast of the Brazil. He likes a lot of the songs in English. This is the mos hobby and he even craied when heard. He wishes to understend the lyrics. then he decided to learn English. But it wasn´t easy. He wasn´t inteligent. He wacht movies, series, read historys but he did undestood enogh. Day by day he was more traumatized, the more he tryed the less learned, then he stop with the songs. This situacion made him to give up of the learn. But the other hand, he come back to hear, he come back to enjoy without pression. Then, he started to read books about the sings, generals films with sings and sudernly, he met a american people on supermarket. They started to talking about songs. when he less holpe, he was talking in English.....then, he was very happy for a good surprise!!!

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The Brazilian that wishs who wishes to speak English fluency  fluently.

He lives in Sergipe, a state of the northeast of the Brazil. He likes a lot of the songs in English. This is the mos hobby (please explain more) and he even craied when he heard it. He wishes to understand the lyrics. Then  He decided to learn English so he could understand the lyrics. But it wasn´t easy. He wasn´t intelligent. He watched movies, read several book series and history, but still  did not understand enough. Day by day he became more traumatized, the more he tried the less  he learned.  He eventually stopped with the songs. This situation led him to give up on learning. But on the other hand, he come back to hear (?), he come back to enjoy without opression. Then, he started to read books about the songs, watch generals films with songs. sudernly  Suddenly, he met an American  people person on in the supermarket. They started to talking about songs. when he less holpe (?), he was talking in English.....then, he was very happy for a good surprise!!!  This surprise made him very happy.


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The brazilian that wishs wishes to speak English fluency fluently

He lives in Sergipe, a state of the northeast of the Brazil. He likes a lot of the songs in English. This is the mos hobby (?) and he even craied cried when heard the songs. He wishes to understend  understand the lyrics. then he He then decided to learn English. But it wasn´t easy. He wasn´t inteligent enough. He wacht  watched movies, series TV Shows, read historys  stories but he did didn't undestood enogh understand enough (1). Day by day he was more traumatized, the more he tryed tried the less he learned, then he stop  stopped with the songs. This situacion situation made him to give up of the learn learning english. But on the other hand, he come goes back to hearing, he come goes back to enjoying the songs without pression pressure. Then, he started to read books about the sings songs, generals usually films movies with sings songs and sudernly suddenly, he met an american people on the supermarket. They started to talking about songs. when he less holpe least expected, he was talking in English.....then, he was very happy for a good surprise!!!

*1. Quando a frase já está no passado usando o "did" o verbo não é passado pro passado também.

* Algumas frases estão traduzidas literalmente do português para o inglês, o que gera algumas incongruências na forma de se expressar, não corrigi todas, mas dá para entender. "Less hope" por exemplo, em português seria tentando chegar no "menos esperava" , porém a tradução seria algo como "Least expected".

Eu diria que precisa decorar mais a gramática, mas dá para entender. Apenas a parte do "This is the mos hobby" que não entendi o que significa




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