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The Brazilian that wishs who wishes to speak English fluency fluently.
He lives in Sergipe, a state of the northeast of the Brazil. He likes a lot of the songs in English. This is the mos hobby (please explain more) and he even craied when he heard it. He wishes to understand the lyrics. Then He decided to learn English so he could understand the lyrics. But it wasn´t easy. He wasn´t intelligent. He watched movies, read several book series and history, but still did not understand enough. Day by day he became more traumatized, the more he tried the less he learned. He eventually stopped with the songs. This situation led him to give up on learning. But on the other hand, he come back to hear (?), he come back to enjoy without opression. Then, he started to read books about the songs, watch generals films with songs. sudernly Suddenly, he met an American people person on in the supermarket. They started to talking about songs. when he less holpe (?), he was talking in English.....then, he was very happy for a good surprise!!! This surprise made him very happy.Please contact me if you have any further questions, I would be happy to help! :)
The brazilian that wishs wishes to speak English fluency fluently
*1. Quando a frase já está no passado usando o "did" o verbo não é passado pro passado também.
* Algumas frases estão traduzidas literalmente do português para o inglês, o que gera algumas incongruências na forma de se expressar, não corrigi todas, mas dá para entender. "Less hope" por exemplo, em português seria tentando chegar no "menos esperava" , porém a tradução seria algo como "Least expected".
Eu diria que precisa decorar mais a gramática, mas dá para entender. Apenas a parte do "This is the mos hobby" que não entendi o que significa
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