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An invented story about a match
Hi everyone. I have just invented a story to practice some new words and expressions.He was never fond to get up of waking up at the crack of dawn, but when his alarm clock went off at 4am that day, he woke up and put the light on in next to no time. The match had been brought forward at the last minute and he wanted to arrive at the stadium in good time. He didn't like the people who turned showed up late and then made up some excuses about being held up by the traffic or something like that. He set his heart on (maybe add a verb of some sort, say something like "he set his heart on being a part of the team" his team and wanted all his teammates to do the same. When After he had his breakfast, he was already looking ahead forward to the match. The fact that the match had been brought forward (maybe try something like "changed to an earlier time") had really messed up his plan for the day, but he couldn't care less about the other things he had to do. If all went according to plan, today they his team will win the championship. But something went wrong that day. When he arrived at the stadium, he found out that the match had been called off due to bad weather.
Thank you in advance for the correction!
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