My hometown

My hometown lies in Heilongjiang province, which is the most northernmost part/point of China. The weather is very cold in winter, reaching temperatures of about 25 below zero under, and of course, it is very cool in summer. Do you know the northeast dialect? It's an interesting dialect in China. Welcome to China. Welcome to the northern of China. I can take you to watch the ice lights and snow display. (or the ice and snow festival)

Would You Help me to Correct the Letter

Dear Professor,
I found your information on the website of the Department of Statistics and noticed that your research focuses on Change-Point Analysis in Time Series and Environmental Statistics, which is something I take a great interest in. I was majoring in Mathematics for 6 years and worked in the Research & Development Department of a technology company after the graduating with my Masterson from the master. I have a good background of computer skills, programming and mathematics.
I wonder if you would be taking any PhD student/s next in the Fall of 2018. In addition, would it be possible for you to tell me more about what you are concentratinged / focusing on currently recently? And Apart from this, I am also interested in what you are going to pursue in the future.
Thank you for your attention, and I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,
Wang Mengmeng

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Thank you for correcting my letter.

clear goal

Everyone has to have a dream, and I do too me too. I dream of travelling around the world some day.one day, I can travel around the world. I work at a travel agency now. Actually, now I work as a saleslady at a travel agency everyday. However, I'm training to be an English guide so I am studying English in at EF. At the end of the year, I have an exam at the end of the year and if I could can passed it, then in a year's time, I probably can probably take a team to the overseas. Although it's not easy and it stresses me/I am stressedful, I look forward to being an English guide.

IELTS Writing task 2: rise in world's population

TASK: The continued rise in world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Some affirm that nowadays the increase of world's population is the most serious problem that humanity has to deal with. It is indeed a danger in particular because this rise could worsen world hunger, since there won't be enough resources for such a great number of people. But, what is this augmentation due to?
Firstly, even if in some continents, for instance in Europe, the number of birth is significantly decreasing, in several parts of the world, namely in Africa, population is continuing to increase for many reasons concerning a number of aspects of society, such as the level of female education or religion.
Secondly, the development of health care made increased life expectancy in current times far more longer (increased means the same as this) compared to the past. than how it was before. In fact, if we look at European history, we can notice that there were some periods in which the population was reduced after an epidemic (the plague, the cholera and so on). At the present time, hopefully (this makes the argument sound weak), we don't ( avoid contractions)do not have to worry about these diseases anymore.
Furthemore, the amelioration of hygienic conditions had  played an important role in the rise of world's population because, as is well known, it reduced the risks related to illnesses.
To conclude, this augmentation is due to a number of factors and it could be very difficult to handle in the future (Summarise the factors you wrote about). Nevertheless, I am not convinced that population increase is the main problem humanity has to face ( Nothing in this essay supports your opinion. The entire essay only focuses on one question. This means that your task response is incomplete). On the contrary, I believe that global warming, as well as other environmental issues, is the main danger we have to confront in this era (You should have written a paragraph about these issues in support of your opinion)

IELTS Writing task 2: rise in world's population

TASK: The continued rise in world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Some affirm? (The topic starts with a fact, not one side of an argument) that  Nowadays, the increase of the world's population is the most serious problem that humanity has to deal with. It is indeed a danger, in particular, because this rise could worsen world hunger since there won't be enough resources for such a great number of people ( This seems to imply that you agree with the topic, yet your conclusion contradicts this statement). But, what is this augmentation due to? (Who is this question for?)

In an introduction, you should give a background statement related to the topic and state your thesis very clearly. The thesis should give the examiner an overview of the content of the essay. If you disagree with the topic then clearly state this and you may include the reason, without detailed explanation for this as the explanations should be done in the body paragraphs. Then state that this essay will explore some of the factors that influence this issue. In this way, you will clearly outline the purpose of the essay and address both the questions of the task.

(You need to start this paragraph with a topic sentence that indicates the content in it. If you disagree then start the paragraph by stating that you disagree with this topic for two/ three main reasons or something to that effect.) Firstly, even though if in some continents, for instance in Europe, the number of births is significantly decreasing in some continents such as Europe, in several other parts of the world, the  namely in Africa, the population is continuing to increase for many reasons.( This sentence is too complex). A good illustration of this is in Africa, where this trend is influenced/ catalyzed by certain aspects   concerning a number of aspects of society, such as the level of female education and religion. 
Secondly, the development of health care made life expectancy far more longer than how it was before. In fact, if we look at European history, we can notice that there were some period in which population was reduced after an epidemic (the plague, the cholera and so on). At the present time, hopefully, we don't have to worry about these diseases anymore.
Furthemore, the amelioration of hygienic conditions had an important role in the rise of world's population because, as is well known, it reduce the risks related to illnesses.
To conclude, this augmentation is due to a number of factors and it could be very difficult to handle in the future. Nevertheless, I am not convinced that population increase is the main problem humanity has to face. On the contrary, I believe that global warming, as well as other environmental issues, is the main danger we have to confront in this era.

A meeting

Hi, Leon,
I attended a meeting last month. Some five-star hotels owners/managers/shareholders ( If you say "five star hotels came", it sounds like the hotel buildings came. Rather specify who represented those 5 star hotels in the meeting)came to Wuhan who because they wanted to develop Wuhan its ("its" refers to Wuhan. Try not to repeat words, especially in the same sentence) hotel's market. I got several good prices from them and also some good manners that we can use it at our own customers' meetings.
First, they introduced the hotel with using a PPT, the with exquisite pictures and background music, which really attracted our attention very much.
Secondly, they prepared the lunch for the meeting, it's which was thoughtful.
At the end, everyone had received a gift from the hotels. This little surprise made everyone felt feel happy.
Although the details were small, the participants are were satisfied, it's and that was very important. I suggested that we can prepare ours meetings like this in the future.

People now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past

A prevalent topic which is undergoing debate currently is that whether it is less happy or less satisfied for modern people with their lives. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion because modern people usually pursuit higher quality of life than people in the past, and they also not easy to catch many technological products in this day. Thus, I totally agree with the following statement.

To begin with, modern people usually want to pursue a higher quality of life than people in the past. For instance, modern people spend a lot of time on work to earn wages because a high quality of life always cost money. People lose their leisure time and entertainment on their work. They also lose their happiness too. In contrast, ancient people only need to exist through forage, so they do not need to care many things about life. As a result, people in the past were easy to get happiness and satisfaction.

Secondly, even though modern people like to pursuit higher quality of life than the past, it is also important that more and more technological products are changing so quickly. For one thing, the iPhone is a good example. Teenagers change their cell phone in order to get more function on their phone. Thus, we exert all effort and time to earn a salary and lose real need and happy. Another reason is that, as the industrial advance, the technological product is changing too quickly to catch it. People in old ages could not understand the method to use it and not to mention that follow its function like other teenagers. Therefore, many people are easy to disappoint with those technological products when it changes a lot.

In conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I completely agree that modern people are less happy and satisfied with their lives than people in the past. This is because this pursuit has negative impacts such as (Summary of Body 1)depriving themselves of leisure time because of the hours spent at work, and (Body 2 summary)the disappointment they encounter when trying to keep up with advancing technologies. they pursue a high quality of life and dilemma with technological products since changing so quickly. Hence, the world is changing so fast that modern people are less satisfied and enjoyed with their life lives than the people in the past.

People now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past

A prevalent topic which is undergoing debate currently is that whether it is less happy or less satisfied for modern people with their lives. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion because modern people usually pursuit higher quality of life than people in the past, and they also not easy to catch many technological products in this day. Thus, I totally agree with the following statement.

To begin with, modern people usually want to pursue a higher quality of life than people in the past. For instance, modern people spend a lot of time on work to earn wages because a high quality of life always cost money. People lose their leisure time and entertainment on their work. They also lose their happiness too. In contrast, ancient people only need to exist through forage, so they do not need to care many things about life. As a result, people in the past were easy to get happiness and satisfaction.

Secondly, (even though modern people like to pursue a higher quality of life than the past,- this is repetitive) it is also important to consider that more and more technological products are changing rapidly (this is one word that means the same as two words)so quickly. For one thing,  A good illustration of this is the iPhone is a good example. Teenagers change their cell phones in order to get  (try to use alternative words for 'get' when you write)gain more functions on their phones. Thus, we exert all our efforts and time to earn a salary, and in doing so, deprive ourselves of real needs and happiness. lose real need and happy. Another reason is that, as the industrial  industry advances, the technological products  are changing too quickly to keep up with catch it. People in old ages The older citizens neither understand how to use them nor operate any of their functionalities the way teenagers do. not understand the method to use it and not to mention that follow its function like other teenagers. Therefore, many people are easily disappointed to disappoint with those technological products when they change so frequently a lot.

In conclusion, based on the argument explore above, I completely agree that modern people are less happy and satisfied with their lives than people in the past. This is because they pursuit high quality of life and dilemma with technological products since changing so quickly. Hence, the world is changing so fast that modern people are less satisfied and enjoyed with their life than the people in the past.