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Would You Help me to Correct the Letter Dear Professor, I found your information on the website of the Department of Statistics, and noticed that your research focuses on Change-Point Analysis in Time Series and Environmental Statistics which I take great interest on. I was majoring in Mathematics for 6 years, and worked in Research & Development Department of a technology company after the graduation from the master. I have good background of computer skills, programming and mathematics. I wonder if you would take any PhD student next fall 2018. In addition, would it be possible for you to tell me more about what you are concentrated on recently? And I am also interested in what you are going to pursue in the future. Thank you for your attention, and I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely yours, Wang Mengmeng __________________________________________ Thank you for correcting my letter.

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Would You Help me to Correct the Letter

Dear Professor,
I found your information on the website of the Department of Statistics and noticed that your research focuses on Change-Point Analysis in Time Series and Environmental Statistics, which is something I take a great interest in. I was majoring in Mathematics for 6 years and worked in the Research & Development Department of a technology company after the graduating with my Masterson from the master. I have a good background of computer skills, programming and mathematics.
I wonder if you would be taking any PhD student/s next in the Fall of 2018. In addition, would it be possible for you to tell me more about what you are concentratinged / focusing on currently recently? And Apart from this, I am also interested in what you are going to pursue in the future.
Thank you for your attention, and I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,
Wang Mengmeng

__________________________________________
Thank you for correcting my letter.

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