People now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
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Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
A prevalent topic which is undergoing debate currently is that whether it is less happy or less satisfied for modern people with their lives. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion because modern people usually pursuit higher quality of life than people in the past, and they also not easy to catch many technological products in this day. Thus, I totally agree with the following statement.
To begin with, modern people usually want to pursue a higher quality of life than people in the past. For instance, modern people spend a lot of time on work to earn wages because a high quality of life always cost money. People lose their leisure time and entertainment on their work. They also lose their happiness too. In contrast, ancient people only need to exist through forage, so they do not need to care many things about life. As a result, people in the past were easy to get happiness and satisfaction.
Secondly, even though modern people like to pursuit higher quality of life than the past, it is also important that more and more technological products are changing so quickly. For one thing, the iPhone is a good example. Teenagers change their cell phone in order to get more function on their phone. Thus, we exert all effort and time to earn a salary and lose real need and happy. Another reason is that, as the industrial advance, the technological product is changing too quickly to catch it. People in old ages could not understand the method to use it and not to mention that follow its function like other teenagers. Therefore, many people are easy to disappoint with those technological products when it changes a lot.
In conclusion, based on the argument explore above, I completely agree that modern people are less happy and satisfied with their lives than people in the past. This is because they pursuit high quality of life and dilemma with technological products since changing so quickly. Hence, the world is changing so fast that modern people are less satisfied and enjoyed with their life than the people in the past.
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People now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
A prevalent topic which is undergoing debate currently is that whether it is less happy or less satisfied for modern people with their lives. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion because modern people usually pursuit higher quality of life than people in the past, and they also not easy to catch many technological products in this day. Thus, I totally agree with the following statement.
To begin with, modern people usually want to pursue a higher quality of life than people in the past. For instance, modern people spend a lot of time on work to earn wages because a high quality of life always cost money. People lose their leisure time and entertainment on their work. They also lose their happiness too. In contrast, ancient people only need to exist through forage, so they do not need to care many things about life. As a result, people in the past were easy to get happiness and satisfaction.
Secondly, even though modern people like to pursuit higher quality of life than the past, it is also important that more and more technological products are changing so quickly. For one thing, the iPhone is a good example. Teenagers change their cell phone in order to get more function on their phone. Thus, we exert all effort and time to earn a salary and lose real need and happy. Another reason is that, as the industrial advance, the technological product is changing too quickly to catch it. People in old ages could not understand the method to use it and not to mention that follow its function like other teenagers. Therefore, many people are easy to disappoint with those technological products when it changes a lot.
In conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I completely agree that modern people are less happy and satisfied with their lives than people in the past. This is because this pursuit has negative impacts such as (Summary of Body 1)depriving themselves of leisure time because of the hours spent at work, and (Body 2 summary)the disappointment they encounter when trying to keep up with advancing technologies. they pursue a high quality of life and dilemma with technological products since changing so quickly. Hence, the world is changing so fast that modern people are less satisfied and enjoyed with their life lives than the people in the past.
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People now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
A prevalent topic which is undergoing debate currently is that whether it is less happy or less satisfied for modern people with their lives. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion because modern people usually pursuit higher quality of life than people in the past, and they also not easy to catch many technological products in this day. Thus, I totally agree with the following statement.
To begin with, modern people usually want to pursue a higher quality of life than people in the past. For instance, modern people spend a lot of time on work to earn wages because a high quality of life always cost money. People lose their leisure time and entertainment on their work. They also lose their happiness too. In contrast, ancient people only need to exist through forage, so they do not need to care many things about life. As a result, people in the past were easy to get happiness and satisfaction.
Secondly, (even though modern people like to pursue a higher quality of life than the past,- this is repetitive) it is also important to consider that more and more technological products are changing rapidly (this is one word that means the same as two words)so quickly. For one thing, A good illustration of this is the iPhone is a good example. Teenagers change their cell phones in order to get (try to use alternative words for 'get' when you write)gain more functions on their phones. Thus, we exert all our efforts and time to earn a salary, and in doing so, deprive ourselves of real needs and happiness. lose real need and happy. Another reason is that, as the industrial industry advances, the technological products are changing too quickly to keep up with catch it. People in old ages The older citizens neither understand how to use them nor operate any of their functionalities the way teenagers do. not understand the method to use it and not to mention that follow its function like other teenagers. Therefore, many people are easily disappointed to disappoint with those technological products when they change so frequently a lot.
In conclusion, based on the argument explore above, I completely agree that modern people are less happy and satisfied with their lives than people in the past. This is because they pursuit high quality of life and dilemma with technological products since changing so quickly. Hence, the world is changing so fast that modern people are less satisfied and enjoyed with their life than the people in the past.
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A prevalent topic which is undergoing debate currently is that whether it is less happy or less satisfied for modern contemporary folks people are less content ("whether "is signalling comparison) with their lives than those in earlier times (the comparison). Personally, I completely agree with this opinion because modern people usually pursue a higher quality of life than people in the past, and they also not easy experience difficulty to catch keeping up with the many present-day technological products in this day. Thus, I totally agree with the following statement. (This is repetitive- see green highlight)
To begin with, modern people usually want to pursue a higher quality of life than people in the past. For instance, modern people spend a lot of time on work to earn wages because a high quality of life always costs money. People lose their leisure time and entertainment on in exchange for their work. As well as this, they also lose their happiness too. In contrast, ancient people only needed to exist through foraging, so they do did not need to care about many things about concerning life. As a result, people in the past were easy to get acquired happiness and satisfaction more easily.(use comparative language)
Secondly, even though modern people like to pursuit higher quality of life than the past, it is also important that more and more technological products are changing so quickly. For one thing, the iPhone is a good example. Teenagers change their cell phone in order to get more function on their phone. Thus, we exert all effort and time to earn a salary and lose real need and happy. Another reason is that, as the industrial advance, the technological product is changing too quickly to catch it. People in old ages could not understand the method to use it and not to mention that follow its function like other teenagers. Therefore, many people are easy to disappoint with those technological products when it changes a lot.
In conclusion, based on the argument explore above, I completely agree that modern people are less happy and satisfied with their lives than people in the past. This is because they pursuit high quality of life and dilemma with technological products since changing so quickly. Hence, the world is changing so fast that modern people are less satisfied and enjoyed with their life than the people in the past.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
A prevalent topic which is undergoing debate currently is whether modern people's lives are now less happy or satisfied. Personally, I completely agree with this opinion because modern people usually pursuit a higher quality of life than people in the past, and it is also not easy for them to keep up with the many technological products of today. Thus, I totally agree with that following statement.
To begin with, modern people usually want to pursue a higher quality of life than people in the past. For instance, modern people spend a lot of time at work to earn wages because a high quality of life always costs money. People lose their leisure time and entertainment because of their work. They also lose their happiness too. In contrast, ancient people only needed to exist through foraging, so they did not need to care about so many things in life. As a result, people in the past found it easy to get happiness and satisfaction.
Secondly, even though modern people like to pursue a higher quality of life than the past, it is also important that more and more technological products are changing so quickly. For one thing, the iPhone is a good example. Teenagers change their cell phone in order to get more functions on their phone. Thus, we exert all effort and time to earn a salary and lose real needs and happiness. Another reason is that, as industry advances, technological products are changing too quickly to catch up. People in old age can not understand how to use them and, not to mention, follow their capabilities like other teenagers. Therefore, many people are easily disappointed with technological products when they change a lot.
In conclusion, based on the argument explored above, I completely agree that modern people are less happy and satisfied with their lives than people in the past. This is because they pursue a high quality of life and there is a problem with technological products since they are changing so quickly. Hence, the world is changing so fast that modern people are less satisfied and happy with their life than the people in the past.
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