For the first time

I took a trip to Hiroshima with my friend for the first time.
I was very tired but it was very exciting.
This GW is so fulfilling.
This Sunday, I have to go to the university. I am looking forward to it.

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Hi, you did a great job! I only had to change one or two words. Keep up the good work. :)

I want to speak English well.

It's my first day using italki.
My friend recommended it to me.
I'm so happy that I can use this application and talk with others.
I want to improve my English skill by using this application.

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Nice job! I understood your points well. Just work on using more accurate word choice. Good luck on your English journey. :)

Just need a correction if these sentences are wrong

Hello, everyone!

I need your help. Tomorrow we are going to the beach. My daughter loves planes and I think this is a good chance to learn English together :) Could you please correct these sentences? Thank you very much!

Today we are going to the sea in Thailand.

We will fly there by plane.

This is an airport. This is a place where planes take off, land, and stay.

We need to check in first. Don't run away! Stay close!

Now we need to go through this detector. We have to put our hand luggage on this line and let it go through that scanner.

It's time to relax. You can run, sit, play, drink... Do everything you want.

Look out of that window! I can see a plane over there. It is going to take off. It is going down the runway, increasing its speed. Wait, wait... It took off! Now it is flying!

It's time to go to our plane. This bus will deliver us to it. Let's get in.

Now, let's get out the bus, and go up these steps right to the entrance of our plane.

May I carry you in my hands?

It's not time to go up by yourself. There are lots of people that are waiting for their turns.

This is a steward. You can wave your hand at him/her.

Now, let's turn right and find our seats. Where are our seats?

These are our seats. One of them is near the window, so you can look out of it and watch the clouds floating by during all our flight.

It's time to fasten our seat belts. I fastened my seat belt. Sit down on my lap. We need to fasten your seat belt.

Don't protest! It's just until we take off.

Did you feel that? The plane started moving. It is going to take off.

Now we can take our seat belts off.

Let's take a tour of the plane. There are many people doing something. Somebody is reading, somebody is looking at his phone...

This is a toilet. If you want to go wee-wee/a poo you can always ask me to go to this place.

Thank you for your attention and your help!

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Nice job! All that needed to be changed was a few words here or there. I recommend working on words like to, go, in, etc. Your English is quite close to perfect. :)

My hobby

I like reading books and watching movies. I like reading books about crime and I am a fan of Harry Potter. I often watch TV series and movies at the cinema. I have an unlimited card, so I go to the cinema twice a week. My favorite films are from Marvel. I don't like sports, but I try to run. It is difficult for me.

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Nice job, you only had minor errors. Just continue to work on words like to, from, of, etc. You have excellent English.:D

Ops. It's time that lots of bugs come out.

There is really bad news that bugs are going to come out during the summer in Korea.
I hate how bugs sound when they are flying near my ears and continuously appear and disappear in front of my eyes.
I also hate the feeling of them creeping on my skin.
A while ago, I had caught three bugs on the wall and ceiling, but they escaped.
I don't really know how they came into my room,
I closed all the holes so they couldn't come in.
They still come into my room.
I found one more now and caught it by using paper.
They irratate me easily when I'm trying to sleep.
I have experienced a lot when it comes to getting up to kill bugs while I'm trying to sleep.
I think I can't sleep deeply while they are flying.
So, I feel the need to catch them as much as I can.
I could sleep comfortably after its done.
It means I am free from bugs when I am sleeping.
This is one of the reasons I don't like summer.
I like winter even if it's really cold and freezing,
because I can wear winter clothing.
On the other hand, in summer, I can't do anything about hot weather.
I can only stay home with air conditioning.
It's kind of boring and tedious.

Princess Mononoke

I'm watching Princess Mononoke.
In Japanese, it's called もののけ姫はこうして生まれた。
Eiichiro Oda said "All creators have to watch it."
Mr. Miyazaki is an older person, even though he always has strong spirits.
He continues to impress me.

I hear that he is creating a new feature-length film.
I hope we can watch his new feature-length film again.

I'm working.

Hello. Today I'm working so I'll register.
I found a job out of this. I was never able to work by myself.
I am very nervous....
But, I was training until today. I will do my best.
Thank you for revising my sentence.
I'd like to learn and speak English with you.

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Nice job, just keep working! I could understand your points, but I recommend just working on revising your sentences and fixing minor issues. You're doing great. :)

Nice to meet you

Hi, I'm Miyabi.
This is my first note book.
I went to Sydney two month ago.
I feel like a foreigner and English again.
Please, exchange languages with me.
Thank you.

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You have good English, I just correct little things like commas and word choice. I recommend working on your commas. Good job!