My busy day...
I'm Ericsson Lima. I'm 15 years old. I'm from Brazil, specifically from Ceara... I'm a student, I live with my grandparents.
I woke up at 06 o'clock. I brushed my teeth, ate breakfast, took my brother to his school and finally I went to my school... In school we had a very busy day, today we had classes of chemistry, physics, mathematics, history and Portuguese. We made a very hard math test, we had a short time and we don't finish correctly. I think that I do it well, but I'm afraid haha.
After to school, I ate my lunch and I went to the post office to send a package to my friends who live in São Paulo. At the post office had a big row, and I had to wait for all the people... When I finally go out to the post office, I went to the mall, to buy a new book, when I got in the mall, the electricity fell, and we was in the dark, this is terrible and funny haha.
Thanks a lot. :)
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My busy day...
I'm Ericsson Lima. I'm 15 years old. I'm from Brazil, specifically from Ceara... I'm a student, and I live with my grandparents.I woke up at 06 o'clock. I brushed my teeth, ate breakfast, took my brother to his school, and finally I went to my school... In school we had a very busy day, today our classes were chemistry, physics, mathematics, history and Portuguese. We had a very hard math test and had a short time to complete it, and we didn't finish it correctly. I think did well, but I'm still afraid haha.
After school, I ate my lunch and I went to the post office to send a package to my friends who live in São Paulo. The post office had a long line, and I had to wait for everyone... When I finally got out of the post office, I went to the mall to buy a new book. When I got to the mall, the electricity went out, and we were in the dark. This is terrible and funny haha.
Thanks a lot. :)
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Nice job! All I really did was add in minor tweaks. Your English is great, keep up the good work.
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My busy day...
I'm Ericsson Lima. I'm 15 years old. I'm from Brazil, specifically from Ceara... I'm a student, and I live with my grandparents.I woke up at 6 o'clock. I brushed my teeth, ate breakfast, took my brother to his school, and finally I went to my school... In school we had a very busy day, today we had classes of chemistry, physics, mathematics, history and Portuguese. We had a very hard math test. We had a short time and didn't finish it correctly. I think that I did well, but I'm afraid haha.
After school, I ate my lunch and went to the post office to send a package to my friends who live in São Paulo. At the post office there was a long line, and I had to wait behind all those people... When I finally left from the post office, I went to the mall to buy a new book. When I got there, the electricity blacked out, and we were in the dark. This is terrible and funny haha.
Thanks a lot. :)
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Great job bro! Your English is really good! There only a few errors, but the writing overall is very understandable. Keep up the good work and practice!
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