Search from various English teachers...
Japan flagKentaro
For the first time I made a trip to Hiroshima with my friend for the first time. I was very tired but It was very exciting. This GW is so fulfilling. From Sunday, I have to go to the university. I am looking forward to it.

Corrections · 5

1

For the first time

I took a trip to Hiroshima with my friend for the first time.
I was very tired but it was very exciting.
This GW is so fulfilling.
Starting Sunday, I have to go to the university. I am looking forward to it.


Great job! This was easy to understand.

0

For the first time

I took a trip to Hiroshima with my friend for the first time.
I was very tired but it was very exciting.
This GW is so fulfilling.
This Sunday, I have to go to the university. I am looking forward to it.

------

Hi, you did a great job! I only had to change one or two words. Keep up the good work. :)

0

For the first time

I went on  a trip to Hiroshima  with some friends of mine for the first time
It was very tiring, yet exciting at the same time.

This GW ??? is so fulfilling.> What is "GW" ?> I  had a fulfilling experience during my stay  there
From Sunday, I have to go to the university. I am looking forward to it.> However, this coming Sunday, I have to go back to university. I am looking forward to it regardless how I feel about it.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today