Just need a correction if these sentences are wrong
Hello, everyone!
I need your help. Tomorrow we are going to the beach. My daughter loves planes and I think this is a good chance to learn English together :) Could you please correct these sentences? Thank you very much!
Today we are going to the sea to Thailand.
We will fly there by plane.
This is an airport. This is a place where planes take off, land and stay.
We need to check in first. Don't run away! Stay close!
Now we need to go through this detector. We have to put our hand lauggage on this line and let it go through that scanner.
It's time to relax. You can run, sit, play, drink... Do everything you want.
Look out of that window! I can see a plain over there. It is going to take off. It is going down the runway increasing its speed. Wait, wait... It took off! Now it is flying!
It's time to pass to our plane. This bus will deliver us to it. Let's get in.
Now let's get out the bus and go up these steps right to the entrance of our plane.
May I carry you in my hands?
It's not time to go up by yourself. There are lots of people that are waiting for their turns.
This is a steward. You can wave your hand at him/her.
Now let's turn right and find our seats. Where are our seats?
These are our seats. One of them is near the window, so you can look out of it and watch the clouds floating by during all our flight.
It's time to fasten our seat belts. I fastened my seat belt. Sit down on my lap. We need to fasten your seat belt.
Don't protest! It's just for time of taking off.
Did you feel that? The plane started moving. It is going to take off.
Now we can take our seat belts off.
Let's make a tour of the plane. There are many people doing something. Somebody is reading, somebody is looking at his phone...
This is a toilet. If you want to do wee-wee/a poo you can always ask me to go to this place.
Thank you for your attention and your help!
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Just need a correction if these sentences are wrong
Hello, everyone!I need your help. Tomorrow we are going to the beach. My daughter loves planes and I think this is a good chance to learn English together :) Could you please correct these sentences? Thank you very much!
Today we are going to the sea in Thailand.
We will fly there by plane.
This is an airport. This is a place where planes take off, land, and stay.
We need to check in first. Don't run away! Stay close!
Now we need to go through this detector. We have to put our hand luggage on this line and let it go through that scanner.
It's time to relax. You can run, sit, play, drink... Do everything you want.
Look out of that window! I can see a plane over there. It is going to take off. It is going down the runway, increasing its speed. Wait, wait... It took off! Now it is flying!
It's time to go to our plane. This bus will deliver us to it. Let's get in.
Now, let's get out the bus, and go up these steps right to the entrance of our plane.
May I carry you in my hands?
It's not time to go up by yourself. There are lots of people that are waiting for their turns.
This is a steward. You can wave your hand at him/her.
Now, let's turn right and find our seats. Where are our seats?
These are our seats. One of them is near the window, so you can look out of it and watch the clouds floating by during all our flight.
It's time to fasten our seat belts. I fastened my seat belt. Sit down on my lap. We need to fasten your seat belt.
Don't protest! It's just until we take off.
Did you feel that? The plane started moving. It is going to take off.
Now we can take our seat belts off.
Let's take a tour of the plane. There are many people doing something. Somebody is reading, somebody is looking at his phone...
This is a toilet. If you want to go wee-wee/a poo you can always ask me to go to this place.
Thank you for your attention and your help!
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Nice job! All that needed to be changed was a few words here or there. I recommend working on words like to, go, in, etc. Your English is quite close to perfect. :)
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The last sentence needs 'with you'. And I need a monkey smile with closed eyes. Sorry!
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