Nice to meet you
Hi. i'm Miyabi.
My first time note book.
I went to sydney 2 month ago.
I feel like foreinger and English again.
Pleace exchenge language with me.
Thank you.
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Nice to meet you
Hi. I'm Miyabi.This is my first time writing a notebook entry.
I went to Sydney 2 months ago.
I feel like a foreinger foreigner and English again. (I don't understand the second part, "and English again.")
Pleace Please exchenge exchange languages with me. (You can say: Let's become language partners.)
Thank you.
Hi Miyabi, welcome to italki!
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Nice to meet you
Hi, I'm Miyabi.This is my first note book.
I went to Sydney two month ago.
I feel like a foreigner and English again.
Please, exchange languages with me.
Thank you.
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You have good English, I just correct little things like commas and word choice. I recommend working on your commas. Good job!
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