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    Happy new year!

    Good afternoon everyone!

    A new year begins restoring renews our hopes for the year to come. I Honestly, I have no big major expectations for this the coming year, or at least, I haven't set the bar too high enough, but I really [hope that]/[wish] this will be a great year for everyone. Personally, I intend to keep continue studying English and French as I have been doing for awhile; hopefully reaching fluency in French by the end of 2017. I also hope that I get to travel abroad a bit more this year, fulfilling my desires for of meeting new people and seeing the beautiful places this planet has kept in store for us. Most of all, I wish hope this planet will become a more peaceful place, and that people realize that spreading good actions/good will is the real deal [or, is the right thing to do].

    I think that's all for now, all corrections are appreciated. Take care!

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    The corrections are mostly to help you sound more fluent. You already write well :)


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    January 4, 2017
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    My Shih Tzu, Spartacus

    I have a dog, a Shih Tzu, called Spartacus. He is three and a half years old and he is a very happy, intelligent dog.

    Spartacus has his own routine: everyday, he wakes up together with the sun, does not no matter what time it is. Then, he walks around the house, goes to his bathroom (a newspaper sheet at in the laundry room), and then he asks me to climb into my bed.

    So, Then/Next he sleeps a little bit more, and definitely he wakes up with me, and goes to his pet jokes toys. He runs after his toys, he chews things, he plays with things with his paws, and does pet cute/adorable/dog-like/doggy/pet-like things like these that.

    He never forgets to take some a few naps during the day. and he He eats when he is hungry or when his muzzle smells a carrot, a some fruit, ou or a some cheese; his favorite foods.

    And they still say around that a dog's life is hard. Not Spartacus' life, for sure!

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    I recommend using the optional Oxford Comma: https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/explore/what-is-the-oxford-comma
    (Você não tem que, mas eu acho que ajudam) 

    Here is why: https://img.buzzfeed.com/buzzfeed-static/static/2014-01/enhanced/webdr02/15/13/enhanced-buzz-19782-1389811855-0.jpg

    You're doing great, cheers!
    Você estou fazendo bom, tchau!


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    January 4, 2017
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    Escrevendo sobre nada As vez no trabalho, no fim do dia, nós batemos em uma bola com nossos joelhos sobre uma rede no corredor. Mas depois, eu vou em casa e jogar videogames com meus amigos. Mas antes que, eu tenho que comer jantar. Eu estou só falando coisas para escrever isso notebook. Eu escrever muitas palavras em meu pessoal livro para ajude-me lembro tarde. O problema aqui esta que tenho que usar Google Translate com palavras demais. Para disse a verdade, o só palavras eu sei bem esta sobre comida e como que pedir cervejas e vinhos. Eu acho todos palavras esta na ruim ordem, mas eu tenho que começa algum lugar. As vezes isso é diversão, mas outras vezes isso é duro. Outra dia, eu fui um restaurante e eu pergunta a pessoa que trabalha lá, "Vocé quer agua?" quando eu quero falar "Eu quero agua". Ela não gostava gostei disso. Mas, o que posso eu fazer? Só continuar aprendendo. Pinha é meu novo melhor fruta.
    January 3, 2017
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    Ano Novo Festa No Ano Novo, eu fui para festa de Rock and Roll. Eu fui com minha namorada e nossos amigos. Nós ficamos lá até dez horas da manhã. O lugar estava perto do Pão de Açúcar. Eu bebi demais, mas, quem não faz. Eu falei com muitos amigos que eu não via há três anos. A noite estava muito legal.
    January 2, 2017
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