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Happy new year! Good afternoon everyone! A new year begins restoring our hopes for the year to come. I honestly have no big expectations for this year, or at least I haven't set the bar too high, but I really wish that this will be a great year for everyone. Personally, I intend to keep studying English and French as I have been doing for a while, hopefully reaching fluency in French by the end of 2017. I also hope that I get to travel abroad a bit more this year, fulfilling my desires for meeting new people and seeing the beautiful places this planet has kept for us. Most of all, I wish this planet will be a more peaceful place, and people realize that spreading good actions is the real deal. I think that's all for now, all corrections are appreciated. Take care!

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Happy new year!

Good afternoon everyone!

A new year begins restoring renews our hopes for the year to come. I Honestly, I have no big major expectations for this the coming year, or at least, I haven't set the bar too high enough, but I really [hope that]/[wish] this will be a great year for everyone. Personally, I intend to keep continue studying English and French as I have been doing for awhile; hopefully reaching fluency in French by the end of 2017. I also hope that I get to travel abroad a bit more this year, fulfilling my desires for of meeting new people and seeing the beautiful places this planet has kept in store for us. Most of all, I wish hope this planet will become a more peaceful place, and that people realize that spreading good actions/good will is the real deal [or, is the right thing to do].

I think that's all for now, all corrections are appreciated. Take care!

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The corrections are mostly to help you sound more fluent. You already write well :)


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Absolutely amazing. I think my English skills even feel threatened from reading this xD

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