My Shit Tzu Spartacus
I have a dog, of Shih Tzu breed, called Spartacus. He is three and a half years old and he is a very joyful and intelligent dog.
Spartacus has his own routine: everyday, he wake up together with the sun, does not matter what time it is. Then, he walk around the house, goes to his bathroom (a newspaper sheet at the laundry room) and then he asks me to climb my bed.
So, he sleeps a little bit more, and definitely he wakes up with me, and goes to his pet jokes. He runs after his toys, he chews things, he plays with his paws and does pet things like these.
He never forgets to take some few naps during the day and he eats when he is hungry or when his muzzle smells a carrot, a fruit ou a cheese, his favorite foods.
And still say around that dogs life is hard. Not Spartacus life, for sure!
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My Shih Tzu, Spartacus
I have a dog, a Shih Tzu, called Spartacus. He is three and a half years old and he is a very happy, intelligent dog.Spartacus has his own routine: everyday, he wakes up together with the sun, does not no matter what time it is. Then, he walks around the house, goes to his bathroom (a newspaper sheet at in the laundry room), and then he asks me to climb into my bed.
So, Then/Next he sleeps a little bit more, and definitely he wakes up with me, and goes to his pet jokes toys. He runs after his toys, he chews things, he plays with things with his paws, and does pet cute/adorable/dog-like/doggy/pet-like things like these that.
He never forgets to take some a few naps during the day. and he He eats when he is hungry or when his muzzle smells a carrot, a some fruit, ou or a some cheese; his favorite foods.
And they still say around that a dog's life is hard. Not Spartacus' life, for sure!
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You're doing great, cheers!
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My Shit Tzu Spartacus
I have a dog, of Shih Tzu breed, called Spartacus. He is three and a half years old and he is a very joyful and intelligent dog.Spartacus has his own routine: everyday, he wakes up together with the sun, it does not matter what time it is. Then, he walks around the house, goes to his bathroom (a newspaper sheet at the laundry room) and then he asks me to climb my bed.
So, he sleeps a little bit more, and definitely (?) he wakes up with me, and goes to his pet jokes. He runs after his toys, he chews things, he plays with his paws and does pet things like these.
He never forgets to take some few (a few or some, using both doesn't sound natural) naps during the day and he eats when he is hungry or when his muzzle smells carrots, fruits or cheese, his favorite foods.
And (some or they) still say that a dog's life is hard. Not Spartacus' life, for sure!
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