#IELTS# are they right?pls help me improve them , thank you! (8) The consumption of coal, oil and gas is the major source of carbon emissions, which are believed to be responsible for global warming. If this trend continues, the sea level would rise and it may lead to disastrous consequences. To solve this problem, the mankind needs to cut down the use of fossil fuels and thus reduce carbon emissions. (9) As the world population keeps growing, the demand for water increases every year. However, the amount of fresh water is limited and in many countries and regions, water shortage poses a threat to people’s survival and health. As the administrator of the society, the government has the obligation to control the water people use in their daily lives. For example, it can increase water price to discourage people from using too much water. (10) Moreover, fertilizers and pesticides are commonly used in agriculture and the chemicals may pollute the underground water. Many factories discharge waste water into the river and lake, which also leads to serious water pollution. Therefore, it is urgent to solve these problems and protect valuable water resource.

#IELTS# (PlS help me correct it ,thanks!)Describe a piece of equipment in your home You should say: what it is; how often you use it; who you usually use it with; and explain why this item is important to you. Well, the equipment I want to share with you is the ipad mini. Going Back to /back in the spring festival several months ago, I just received a couple of red envelops, which gave me a budget to buy something expensive. As a result, I bought an ipad mini for 2000 Yuan on an online shopping website called taobao, which is known as the Chinese version of Amazon. Regarding the appearance, the sleek design and white color impressed me a lot. Compared with other types of products from the Apple Company, it’s not very heavy and it’s easier for me to carry. It is my belief that Apple products are innovative and deserve the high price. Talking about its functions, given that I am a senior student majoring in finance at the university and I wish to continue my study in the uk, I use the ipad almost every single day mainly for ielts preparation. Just with the touch of screen, I have access to various resources about learning English. When faced with a project, by going through essays with the ipad, I am capable of acquiring knowledge and absorbing information in terms of finance, investment and so forth. Apart from that, after finishing the task, occasionally I surf on the internet to buy things I need, which brings much convenience to my daily life. That’s why I consider the ipad mini to be a good helper for me.

#IELTS#(Please correct it ,thanks!)Describe a time you made an appointment You should say: What it is When you started to become interested in it What you have learned from it And explain why you have interest in it Well, the science subject that I am interested in is mathematics, which is the most fundamental science subject in my mind. Actually, I have been studying math ever since my primary school, areas like algebra, geometry, calculus and so forth. As I recall, when I was on my home from school, my father always asked me quiz questions, which raised my interests of learning math. Personally, I do believe it is important and I love it for some reasons. Firstly, it offers me a chance to develop intellectual potential. Whenever I come across some math problems, I would try many methods to deal with them. I might get a sense of fulfillment by solving a math problem. There is no doubt that my logical thinking can be greatly boosted. In addition to that, considering that my major is Finance and I intend to become a financial analyst in the future, grasping the knowledge of math is undoubtedly necessary. Obviously, math is the foundation of every other subjects including Finance. When it comes to research financial problems, I need do a lot of math-related work such as building a math model and solving the equation. What’s more, if we didn’t know basic knowledge of math, we would fall into trouble very easily in our daily life; for example, we are not able to have a financial plan or compare prices of products from different companies in order to save money. In general, Mathematic ability is a must-have skill for me. That’s why it is worth learning.

#IELTS#(Please correct it ,thanks!)Describe a time you made an appointment You should say: when and where it happened; what the appointment was for; what happened when you made it; and explain how you felt about the appointment. The experience I would like to share with you roughly happened several months ago. That was my first time to have an appointment and a conversation with a foreigner. Back then， I was a junior student majoring in finance at University. Considering I had spare time after class, I found a part-time job at an English institution called Golden Sunshine. In the meanwhile, I had to face the reality that before becoming a teaching assistant, I had to pass the interview by a foreign teacher. Apparently, it was a challenge for me as I hadn’t spoken to a native English speaker before. Afterwards, I received an e-mail about the appointment at 9’o clock at the office on that Saturday. I could still recall that my interviewer was a New Yorker, Michael, the English teacher working there. At the very beginning of the interview, he asked me to introduce myself, I was so nervous that I couldn’t complete a single sentence. Fortunately, Michael was kind and patient. He guided me through the conversation of what my duties would entail. Eventually, I got the Job, which made me so excited. Generally speaking, this appointment left me with a lasting impression, since that set me on the path to better my oral English. That’s why I want to share it with you.

#IELTS#(Please correct it , thank you)Describe a tall building in your hometown you like or dislike You should say: Where it is What it is used for What it looks like And explain why you like or dislike it The tall building I would like to talk with you is a shopping centre called Golden sunshine, which is located in the centre of my hometown. Talking about the appearance, generally, it is a 30-storey modern architecture which looks like a tower. The designer of the building did a great job in combining simplicity and creativity together, which makes it very eye-catching. Regarding my feelings, I love this building in several aspects. In the first place, it combines a range of functions, which makes it possible for people from all walks of life to do various kinds of things there. As I recall, there are a lot of luxury stores on the first and second floor, like DIOR, Prada, in most cases, as a student I seldom consume there. While I often visit the seventh and eighth floors, where are full of a wide range of restaurants, from local delicacies to foreign food like western food and Japanese food. During weekends, I sometimes go to the gym on the ninth floor in order to work up a sweat. Apart from that, the staff there are really patient well-trained. I can still remember that once I forgot my bag in an Indian food restaurant, after 15 minutes, the broadcast made an announcement about it. Eventually, I got my bag back in the customer service centre. In general, this building left me an lasting impression, and I would like to share it with you.