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#IELTS#(Please correct it ,thanks!)Describe a time you made an appointment You should say: when and where it happened; what the appointment was for; what happened when you made it; and explain how you felt about the appointment. The experience I would like to share with you roughly happened several months ago. That was my first time to have an appointment and a conversation with a foreigner. Back then, I was a junior student majoring in finance at University. Considering I had spare time after class, I found a part-time job at an English institution called Golden Sunshine. In the meanwhile, I had to face the reality that before becoming a teaching assistant, I had to pass the interview by a foreign teacher. Apparently, it was a challenge for me as I hadn’t spoken to a native English speaker before. Afterwards, I received an e-mail about the appointment at 9’o clock at the office on that Saturday. I could still recall that my interviewer was a New Yorker, Michael, the English teacher working there. At the very beginning of the interview, he asked me to introduce myself, I was so nervous that I couldn’t complete a single sentence. Fortunately, Michael was kind and patient. He guided me through the conversation of what my duties would entail. Eventually, I got the Job, which made me so excited. Generally speaking, this appointment left me with a lasting impression, since that set me on the path to better my oral English. That’s why I want to share it with you.

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#IELTS#(Please correct it ,thanks!)Describe a time you made an appointment

You should say:
when and where it happened;
what the appointment was for;
what happened when you made it;
and explain how you felt about the appointment.

The experience I would like to share with you happened about several months ago. That was my first time to meet and talk with a foreigner.

Back then I was an undergraduate majoring in finance at university. Considering I had spare time after class, I found a part-time job at an English institution called 'Golden Sunshine'.

In the meanwhile, I had to face the reality that before becoming a teaching assistant, I had to pass the interview by a foreign teacher. Apparently, it was a challenge for me as I hadn’t spoken to a native English speaker before. Afterwards, I received an e-mail about the appointment for 9 o'clock at the office on that Saturday.

I can still recall that my interviewer was a New Yorker, Michael, the English teacher working there.

At the very beginning of the interview, he asked me to introduce myself. I was so nervous that I couldn’t complete a single sentence. Fortunately, Michael was kind and patient. He guided me through the conversation of what my duties would entail.

Eventually, I got the Job, which made me so excited.

Generally speaking, this appointment left me with a lasting impression, since that set me on the path to better my oral English. That’s why I want to share it with you.

Very well written! You're hired (not fired)!

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#IELTS#(Please correct it ,thanks!)Describe a time you made an appointment

You should say:
when and where it happened;
what the appointment was for;
what happened when you made it;
and explain how you felt about the appointment.

The experience I would like to share with you roughly happened *roughly* several months ago. That was my first time to have an appointment and a conversation with a foreigner.

Back then, I was a junior student majoring in finance at University. Considering I had spare time after class, I found a part-time job at an English institution called Golden Sunshine.

In the meanwhile, I had to face the reality that before becoming a teaching assistant, I had to pass the interview by a foreign teacher. Apparently  Evidently, it was a challenge for me as I hadn’t spoken to a native English speaker before. Afterwards, I received an e-mail about the appointment at 9’o clock at the office on that Saturday.

I could still recall that my interviewer was a New Yorker, Michael, the English teacher working there.

At the very beginning of the interview, he asked me to introduce myself, I was so nervous that I couldn’t complete a single sentence. Fortunately, Michael was kind and patient. He guided me through the conversation of what my duties would entail.

Eventually, I got the Job, which made me so excited.

Generally speaking, this appointment left me with a lasting impression, since that set me on the path to better my oral English. That’s why I want to share it with you.

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