#IELTS# (PlS help me correct it ,thanks!)Describe a piece of equipment in your home
You should say:
what it is;
how often you use it;
who you usually use it with;
and explain why this item is important to you.
Well, the equipment I want to share with you is the ipad mini. Going Back to /back in the spring festival several months ago, I just received a couple of red envelops, which gave me a budget to buy something expensive. As a result, I bought an ipad mini for 2000 Yuan on an online shopping website called taobao, which is known as the Chinese version of Amazon.
Regarding the appearance, the sleek design and white color impressed me a lot. Compared with other types of products from the Apple Company, it’s not very heavy and it’s easier for me to carry. It is my belief that Apple products are innovative and deserve the high price.
Talking about its functions, given that I am a senior student majoring in finance at the university and I wish to continue my study in the uk, I use the ipad almost every single day mainly for ielts preparation. Just with the touch of screen, I have access to various resources about learning English. When faced with a project, by going through essays with the ipad, I am capable of acquiring knowledge and absorbing information in terms of finance, investment and so forth.
Apart from that, after finishing the task, occasionally I surf on the internet to buy things I need, which brings much convenience to my daily life.
That’s why I consider the ipad mini to be a good helper for me.
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#IELTS# (PlS help me correct it ,thanks!)Describe a piece of equipment in your home
You should say:what it is;
how often you use it;
who you usually use it with;
and explain why this item is important to you.
Well, the equipment I want to share with you is the ipad mini. Going Back to /back in the spring festival several months ago, I just received a couple of red envelops, which gave me a budget to buy something expensive. As a result, I bought an ipad mini for 2000 Yuan on an online shopping website called taobao, which is known as the Chinese version of Amazon.
Regarding the appearance, the sleek design and white color impressed me a lot. Compared with other types of products from the Apple Company, it’s not very heavy and it’s easier for me to carry. It is my belief that Apple products are innovative and deserve the high price.
Talking about its functions, given the fact that I am a senior student majoring in finance at the university and I now intend to continue my study in the uk, this mini ipad assists me a lot in preparation . Just with the touch of screen, I can easily access to various resources about learning English. When facing with a project , with the aid of this fancy device ,I am capable of acquiring knowledge and absorbing information in terms of finance, investment and so forth.
Apart from that, after finishing the task, I occasionally surf the internet to buy things I need, which brings much convenience to my daily life.
That’s why I consider the ipad mini to be a good helper for me.
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