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    I think sports are really fun, too. I love watching soccer because the stadiums are always so big and loud, and the chants can be very funny. In the U.S., there are very good basketball games that a lot of people participate in. It's fun to be a part of an event where you celebrate the athleticism of people.
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    September 11, 2016
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    México No sé que tantas personas quieren no solo viajar, pero vivir en México. México es uno de los lugares más populares para los extranjeros. Les gustan la calidad de vida y por eso quieren permanecer en el país. Setenta por ciento de inmigrantes le gustan la cultura de México. No solo hay mexicanos que inmigran a los Estados Unidos. Hay mucho de los extranjeros, o "expats," que vuelven a México también. Gracias para cualquiera ayuda. :)
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    "To speak" to someone and "to talk" to someone are basically the same expression, but there's a couple differences between the two verbs. Generally, "to speak" is used in more formal situations and often for more polite requests, e.g. "I would like to speak with him." It's also more for the act of actually saying something, while "talk" is engaging communication with others. This might sound confusing, so I'll give some examples: "speak up," "speak out," "actions speak louder than words" In all the situations above, "talk" would be inappropriate. The actions are figuratively saying something and not actually engaging in communication (if that makes sense). Another example: I would like to speak to the king. I would like to talk to the king. The second one with "talk to" appears more conversational than the first one. The main difference between these two words is that "talk" implies more of a conversation, while "speak" is more one-sided. Hopefully I explained that clearly!
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    September 11, 2016
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    I haven't read the previous chapters of this novel, but I'll try my best to correct it. :)

    The Stranger. Part 2. Chapter 10. The Harvester. Please, correct my mistakes.

    In a few seconds Lisa brought Damien back from the cave.
    "I think the gonlin (gonlin? Do you mean goblin?) became furious by your phrase. "If I had the face like yours..." Lisa said.
    "...I would join"... Yeah!" Damien answered.
    When they came back to the Druid's Town Damien asked, (no colon necessary, just use a comma when someone is about to speak)
    "I like the excursion. Let's turn to the cases. So what should I do ay first? I can't wait to do something."
    "Do you see that garden?" Lisa pointed with her finger far away to the horison. horizon.
    "Yeah. Clearly."
    "Your first task is to harvest the apples."
    "I thought I will would do something different and more helpful thing (this word isn't necessary here)."
    "You forget about the importance of apples. How are you going to evolve?"
    "Yes, you're right. When can I begin?" Damien asked.
    "Anytime. Start as early as you can. Moreover you'll do it alone."
    "Are you kidding?"
    "No. We haven't don't have enough citizens to do this work. You have to supply apples all town. Don't worry. It's your first touch. (First touch? Do you mean first time?) You'll manage it." Lisa answered


    The stuff I wrote in parenthesis is my explanation for the correction. Great work! :) 

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    September 10, 2016
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    Lacking confidence

    I was confident about writing in English. I thought I should care more about speaking, but I found out I wasn't. shouldn't.
    All the writing that I did was as an English learner on italki and other similar websites where it's okay to make mistakes because you're still learning.
    But when I faced with a real life situation where I was able to write in Arabic, but I chose to write in English to leave a good impression because good writing was a required skill for the job.
    After that I felt like I looked stupid. I told myself, "You were so full of yourself. You overestimated your abilities."
    I thought I had the confidence but that wasn't true.

    Please correct me and if there is any sentence that could be written in a better way please write it.
    Thank you :)


    Hey great job with your writing! I could understand it very easily. Always remember that when you are speaking or someone is speaking to you, put their (or your) words into a quote. This way, everyone knows when you started speaking and when you stopped speaking. Hope that helps!

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    September 10, 2016
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    The Importance of Education

    With the development of science and technology, we need some creative and ingenuity ingenious people who can make the world more prosperity prosperous than before. As the saying goes, a person with ability in some field, such as science, technology, engineering, mathematics, etc, is one of the most expensive sources in the 21st century. Therefore, people need to master various skills through a complete education system according to one's own interests.

    Thanks to the advanced and multiple ways of information transmission, we can get the latest knowledge not only from traditional schools and books, but also through the Internet so that we can keep up with the modern world. Moreover, our country provides us with greater learning situations than ever before so that we have no excuse for not trying our best to spend more time and efforts on studying. Education will write one's destiny and, furthermore, determine the future of his country. That's the reason why we should take advantage of every chance to learn as much as possible.

    In addition, the importance of education is that one can receive good manners and gaining gain rewards after going through a rough experience of learning time. The Successful men have a common key that they will set a goal first and then put in the hard work until it takes to succeed. I think we should follow these three points which can also apply to the education. Firstly, don't give up if the problem is hard to settle solve. Successful people will pay more attention to the challenges they met meet and cope with difficulties frequently. Secondly, don't be afraid to fail in the process of learning. What is more, If you persist to finish the work, it there is a good chance to upgrade the level of your professional knowledge and make further achievements on the goal. Last but not least, don't be afraid to ask for help from teachers, classmates, or friends. It doesn't mean that you are worse than others, however but rather that we can get more valuable suggestions from them.

    I believe that everything will pay off. Everyone can make progress by means of how much efforts you have paid on put in education.


    Very nice passage. I enjoyed reading your thoughts and ideas on education. I just corrected any grammar and punctuation mistakes. Keep working on your verb tenses with nouns (ex. "gain rewards" instead of "gaining rewards"). Your transitions between ideas was also very good. Nice job! :)

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    September 10, 2016
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    Why have I studied english?

    I like studying english for several reasons. Firstly, it is a universal language. There are english speakers everywhere, and it's useful for someone who likes traveling. I enjoy watching a lot of American and British TV shows and listening to music that are is sung in english. it would be very great to understand what they are saying without subtitles.


    Nice work! Remember to use conjunctions (and, but, or) to make your sentences flow smoothly. Keep practicing! :)

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    September 10, 2016
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    Do exercise in the morning

    I want to be more healthy healthier so I run in the morning. Today is the fourth day. My alarm clock is set at 6:30, but I wake up at 6:50.
    Then I wash my teeth and face. I go out at 7:10.
    I ran five cycles around the park. It is approximate five kilometers. In the park, I can see many people take doing exercise. Some of them run like me while some of them just walk. ,and other people do exercise .
    When I run, I can see many squirrels. They maybe are on the grass, or on the trees.
    When I finish running, I cook make my breakfast. I cook eggs or some vegetables. Then I go to work by bike and begin my new day.


    Very nice! Make sure to use different verbs so your sentences flow more smoothly. Also, remember you can join sentences together using words like "and," and "but." 

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    September 10, 2016
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    Y. E. Test - 4#

    4) What would you do if you get got lost in an airport?

    At first, I will would keep calm, take a long deep breath and ask help for airport security airport security for help. Probably, my cell phone must would be with me - so, will it would be possible send a message to my coordinator (it's normal find WiFi in airports). My documents must stay next to me too, and this detail is very important to my identification.

    Explanation:

    You generally say "deep" breath instead of a "long" breath, but this is a minor detail. 

    I changed your tense to the conditional - "would." This is because the question appeared to be asking what WOULD you do if you got lost in an airport, not what WILL you do. If the question asked, "What will you do if you get lost in an airport?" then your original response is good. I hope I explained that clearly!


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    September 9, 2016
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    Encounter

    My friend broke up with her boyfriend a few months ago. Apparently she got a thing for someone. She told me about him today. "We met through a mutual friend. He has been divorced once and he has two children, an elementary school student and a middle school student. We have been exchanging emails everyday. He asked me out for dinner yesterday. What should I do? I have never seen him alone. I haven't a nice cloth don't have nice clothes and shoes and on top of that, I'm fat and my hair is messy." I gave advice to her, "Looks are not everything, right? The most important thing is your personality. Though you are fat, your face is so cute. And after all I love your personality! You should go out with him." In the end she decided to see him.

    Good English! The highlighted is what I added/replaced.

    Make sure you practice your punctuation so your sentences are even better. :)

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    September 9, 2016
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