Do exercise in the morning
I want to be more healthy so I run in the morning. Today is the fourth day .My alarm clock is set at 6:30 .But I wake up at 6:50 .
Then I wash teeth and face . I go out at 7:10.
I ran five cycles around the park . It is approximate five kilometers. In the park，I can see many people take exercise . Some of them run like me，some of them just walk ，and other people do exercise .
When I run ，I can see many squirrels . They maybe on the grass，or on the trees.
When I finish running，I cook my breakfast .I cook egg or some vegetables. Then I go to work by bike and begin my new day .
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Do Doing exercise in the morning
I want to be more healthy so I run in the morning. Today is the fourth day .My alarm clock is set at 6:30 .But I woke up at 6:50 .Then I brushed my teeth and washed my face . I went out at 7:10.
I ran five cycles around the park . It was approximate five kilometers. In the park，I saw many people doing exercises . Some of them were running like me，some of them were walking ，and other people were doing exercises.
When I was running ，I could see many squirrels . Some were on the grassand some were on the trees.
When I finished running，I cooked my breakfast .I cooked eggs and some vegetables. Then I went to work by bike and began my new day .
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Do exercise in the morning
I want to be more healthy healthier so I run in the morning. Today is the fourth day. My alarm clock is set at 6:30, but I wake up at 6:50.Then I wash my teeth and face. I go out at 7:10.
I ran five cycles around the park. It is approximate five kilometers. In the park, I can see many people take doing exercise. Some of them run like me while some of them just walk. ，and other people do exercise .
When I run, I can see many squirrels. They maybe are on the grass, or on the trees.
When I finish running, I cook make my breakfast. I cook eggs or some vegetables. Then I go to work by bike and begin my new day.
Very nice! Make sure to use different verbs so your sentences flow more smoothly. Also, remember you can join sentences together using words like "and," and "but."
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That's nice, your routine seems to be very interesting.
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这篇文章大部分内容应该用过去式，你全部用了现在时，这样表达的意思就不准确了。
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