practice People have different views about what factors play essential roles in the development of a country. In my opinion, both advance in economy and other areas have equally prominent places in a country. There are two main reasons why a variety of authorities pursue economic achievement eagerly. The first one is that economic progress could improve people's quality of living, especially in developing countries where a considerable number of residents cannot reach the level of basic needs. If governments focus on economic development, people are likely to have opportunities to live enjoyable lives and this activity would also reduce crimes relating to money, such as robbery and theft. What's more, the governments would raise global status and become more powerful and influential in the world due to the development of economy.

Please check and correct if I have any mistakes The pie charts illustrate the way of tackling dangerous waste products in three different countries. Overall, Sweden and the United Kingdom mainly dispose of waste by underground, while recycling is the most popular method in Korea. The percentage of incineration accounts for least in all three countries. In Korea, 69% of waste products are dealt with recycling, compared to 25% in Sweden and none in the UK. However, the UK tackles 82% of waste using the method of underground, which is higher than Sweden and Korea, at 55% and 22% respectively. Please check as strict as possible. I'm eager to correct Chinese edition if you need that.

importance for children to be taught art Art plays a prominent role in one society and the development of its culture. Young children benefit from art for acquiring two major capabilities. Firstly, teaching children art is beneficial and useful to improve their mental and imaginary abilities. For instance, children are able to boost their creative thoughts from learning drawing, for they could draw whatever pictures they desire with less limitation. Also, this would encourage children to be brave to express their own opinions, which is conducive to their future life. Moreover, studying art helps children develop their sense of beauty as well as have a deep understanding of culture.They would know better how to match clothes and accessories fashionably if young children are interested in design and fashion industry. In terms of appreciation, they are less likely to feel confused about displayed exhibitions and objects when visiting museums or art galleries. Thanks so much if you correct my writing. Please check as strictly as possible. I am eager to correct your Chinese edition if you need.

the advantage of eating more food from other regions People can eat a wide variety of food in other regions. As a result, it makes people eat more food from other regions than the local region. (advantage) Eating a various range of cuisine from different areas has three main benefits. Firstly, tourists would have enjoyable experiences, which is beneficial to relax after work pressure and helpful to have understanding of distinctive cultures. Furthermore, this activity is able to stimulate cultural communication between different regions so as to make residents from their own places know each other better and more deeply. Finally, from an economic perspective, eating more food from other regions definitely increases the income of these regions, especially conducive to those less popular tourist attractions, which mean that these sites are likely to attract more visitors via delicious cuisine.

the disadvantage of eating more food from other regions People can eat a wide variety of food in other regions. As a result, it makes people eat more food from other regions than the local region. (talk about the disadvantage first) From my point of view, there are two primary disadvantages of eating more food from different parts of the world. The first one is that it might expend more money than before if people enjoy this kind of pleasant lifestyle. Due to the development of public transport, it is efficient and convenient for travelers to go somewhere they desire to. Therefore, those who develop this habit tend to spend more of the amount of money and time, which even has a negative effect on their work and life if someone are addicted to the activity. In addition, this activity plays a detrimental role in the improvement of domestic food industry. Provided that a considerable number of people are prompted to travel to eat outside the local place, there would be little advice or fewer suggestions offered by residents to related restaurants and this is not helpful for these restaurants to make progress. Please correct my mistakes strictly and I'm eager to correct your Chinese edition if you like.