Looking for an au pair

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We would love for you to feel as like a member of our family and we will expect from you to be nice, upbeat, respectful and responsible. In our day-to-day you could help us as follows: dropping off our children at school around 9 am, picking them up at 5 pm and hanging out with them during the evening (until around 7 pm). The school is right bellow our home, so this way you would have a lot of free time to take Spanish lessons, do a master class or anything you would like to do. Of course every day would be a little different and some of them we will need less help than others. Regarding your time with the kids we will be glad if they feel happy while playing with you and be ing able to improve their English skills at the same time. On weekends we would just need your help on Saturday mornings (around three hours), although we wouldn’t have any problem in giving you the whole weekend free when you need it. In the same way you could always spend more time with us at your convenience, but this would be always up to you. We like doing sports and going to the countryside, that is half an hour from Madrid, when the weather is good. Of course during your stay we will be glad to help you improve your Spanish skills.
Please, feel free to ask any additional questions you may have. We appreciate your interest in our family and will be delighted to clear up whatever you need.

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