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topic about food People can eat a wide variety of food in other regions. As a result, it makes people eat more food from other regions than the local region. (talk about the disadvantage first) Text: From my point of view, there are two primary disadvantages of eating more food from different parts of the world. The first one is that it might expend more money than before if people enjoy this kind of pleasant lifestyle. Due to the development of public transport, it is efficient and convenient for travelers to go somewhere they desire to. Therefore, those who develop this habit tend to spend more of the amount of money and time, which even has a negative effect on their work and life if someone are addicted to the activity. In addition, this activity plays a detrimental role in the improvement of domestic food industry. Provided that a considerable number of people are prompted to travel to eat outside the local place, there would be little advice or fewer suggestions offered by residents to related restaurants and this is not helpful for these restaurants to make progress. Please correct my mistakes strictly and I'm eager to correct your Chinese edition if you like.

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topic about food

People can eat a wide variety of food in other regions. As a result, it makes people eat more food from other regions than the local region. (talk about the disadvantage first)

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    From my point of view, there are two primary disadvantages of eating more food from different parts of the world. The first one is that they might expend more money than before if people enjoy this kind of pleasant lifestyle. Due to the development of public transport, it is efficient and convenient for travelers to go wherever they desire. Therefore, those who develop this habit tend to spend more of the amount of money and time; this could have a negative effect on someone's work and life if he or she is addicted to the activity.

    In addition, this activity plays a detrimental role in the improvement of the domestic food industry. Provided that a considerable number of people are prompted to travel to eat outside the local place, there would be little advice or fewer suggestions offered by residents to related restaurants and this does not help these restaurants to make progress.


Very nicely written.

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