PART 2:

So In conclusion, my experience tells me shows that it is ok if you don't own a gift but it is necessary to practice hard. talent is not necessary as long as one is willing to work hard. We need to remember that practice makes prefect.

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Sorry I have to split my corrections into two separate posts because I'm limited to 5000 characters per post. 

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PART 1:

There are Many people believed that it is true that some people are indeed borned with certain talents. For instance, sometimes we can see the young children perform better in the talent shows although they are in a very young age, as compared with the to adults. It shows that these certain talents do work exist in the our daily lives.

On the other hand, others claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. For them, They believe that every child has a equity statement, all children are born equal and they can reach their own achievement  goals if they play put in enough efforts by themselves.
From my perspective Personally, I think it is significant important to have the certain talents but that is not the only way to succeed. We still need other spirits such as hardworking, insistence, to make ourselves completely. Other qualities such as hard work and persistence also contribute greatly to our success. Take myself into a for example, I used to hate dancing which is because I always act like a machine and I am not able to get the right temple. my movements were mechanical and I was unable to keep to the right tempo. It has been for a long time that I always believed that I am not suitable for dancing. can never dance well. However, my dance teacher kept encouraging me to dance and by telling me not to never give up. Because of the With her encouragement by her, I kept practicing even though I didn't dance well initially. After a long time for practicing for a long time, it turned out that even though I don't have a gift for dancing. I can still perform dancing to everyone by making effort in dancing. I can dance well with enough practice even though it did not come to me naturally.

Hi italki comunuty. Can someone correct my writting?

I'm 18 years old and I'm studing studying for the B1 exams of B1. I did the exams in June but I only passed the oral part, then in September i have to do the other three parts(writting, listening and reading), so I will have to redo the other three parts(writing, listening and reading) in September. Now I don't know if I have a good level am good enough to pass that those parts.
I was reading lots of English books and articles in English but I'm not sure if I've got a good my English level is proficient enough. I went to attended English lessons during for four years. In that lessons I learned lots of things in those lessons but I never thought that I will have to study for more exams.
Thanks for reading this and if you can to correct it will be perfect if you can help me to correct it.
Bye

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Are these sentences correct?

A couple of times Some time ago, I read an article on the negative impact of the transplantation, or the introduction of new species to new environments. One of them the examples was about a kind species of frog that I do not remember the exact name to. which It was introduced to some parts of Australia in order to eliminate mitigate the effect of an intrusive species. At first, this species transplantation worked well, but after a while, it itself became a new problem for the area. To further elaborate on this, introducing new species to an area might cause severe damages to the native species in terms of by affecting the the availability of food, prey[I cancelled this word because it is very similar to "food" in this context, so it's redundant], territory, or other things. So Therefore, humans should exercise caution when considering a transplantation.take care of these issues.

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Travel in Candada Trip to Canada

I went to Mt.Rokey visit the Canadian Rockies this summer, it was a very good exerprice experience. People in Candada Canada like to go out during this season.
We drove to Banff National Park from Vancouver airport. long distance driving...... It was a long journey, but a worthy one.
but it is worthy .

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New experiment.

Hi everyone, I'll try a new experiment for  to practice english, I will engrave embed short videos about my activities. The videos will last of about ten secons seconds each. In these videos, I'll practice sentences and phrases that everyone use in general and casual talk are commonly used in daily speech so that I can have a better fluides and pronunciation. improve my pronunciation and speak more fluently.

I'll start be signing up for a english course for in order to be accepted into a speciality with a duration of that will last one year. with it I later i I hope this specialty will allow me to have more work opportunities and start the chance to embark on a master's degree.

Greetings for everyone.

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My first composition in italki

I'm a high school student from China, my English is not very good so I desire wish to impove improve my fluency in it English level.I enjoy listening to music every much, like especially Pop music, and Country music... I always listening listen to English songs cause because I perfervid prefer European and American styles ("Culture" may be a more appropriate word here).  Also, I'll often use some supper very popular in international apps, such as Instagram, Twitter, Snapchat and Youtube for to helping me learn more about English.
I dreaming about have  having a America tour having a tour in America one day, but now I shoud should put my time concentrate on my studise studies. I love animals ~ so there are a dog and two hamsters in my home. My mom looks after them most of the time : P
I'd like to make friends with you guys, then so we cloud could study together and help each other out:D
Maybe there are many grammar mistakes in this composition, I hope you can teach me from that about them. And Thank you every much for reading this ; )

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Earthquakes

1. Are there sometimes earthquakes where you live?
I live in an area often affected by earthquakes.

2. Have you ever experienced an earthquake? If so, how did you feel?
I have experienced many earthquakes, so I am used to it. (You did not answer the highlighted part that asked you on how you felt during the earthquake itself.)

3. If you've never experienced an earthquake, how do you think you might react to one?
I might take cover under a safety safe place so that I can to protect myself.

4. What areas of the world have lots of earthquakes?
Pacific rim is the area that has lots of earthquakes.

5. What are the most frightening things that happen during an earthquake?
Not knowing how strong the earthquake is is the most scariest thing.

Taiwan locates is located on two tectonic plates.
When one plate collides with another the other, it causes the an earthquake.