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Christmas day! (Please, help me by correcting this) Today is a especial day. It's christmas eve! I woke up too excited today... Now it's 10:00am, but I woke up at 9am and turned on the radio, got dressed and went to work out at gym! My whole family is preparing the stuffs for christmas dinner. Unfortunately, my parents aren't married anymore, so I have to retrace: One year I spend christmas with my father and next year with my mother. This year i'm going to spend christmas with my mother and sisters. They are so excited! And so am I. I bought some presents for them. I hope they enjoy it. I also expect they bought something for me too hahaha.. Talking about chistmas, I'd like to know how the people around the world celebrate the christmas day (and eve). I never wanted that before.. But now, studying english and learning about differents cultures, I wish in future I can visit and to experience many different countries and found out about their cultures. Bye for now, Merry christmas!

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Christmas day! (Please, help me by correcting this)

Today is a especial special day. It's Christmas Eve!

I woke up too excited today... I was very excited when I woke up today. Now it's 10:00am, but I woke up at 9am. and I turned on the radio, got dressed and went to work out at the gym!
My whole family is preparing the stuffs for Christmas dinner. Unfortunately, my parents aren't married anymore, so I have to retrace: One year I spend christmas with my father and next year with my mother. alternate between spending Christmas with my mother and father each year.
This year, I'm going to spend Christmas with my mother and sisters. They are so excited! And so am I. We are all very excited!
I bought some presents for them and I hope they will enjoy like it. I also expect they them to have bought something for me too as well hahaha..

Talking Speaking about Christmas, I'd like to know how the people around the world celebrate the Christmas Day (and Eve). I never wanted wondered about that before.. But now, studying english and learning about differents cultures, However, I wish in future I can visit and to experience many different countries and found out about to discover and experience their cultures after studying English and learning about different cultures.

Bye for now, Merry Christmas!

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Hi there! I've corrected your grammar mistakes and awkward expressions to make your sentences sound more fluent. When referring to specific holidays, you should capitalise the first letter of each word. All the best and Merry Christmas! :)

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Same to you .... Merry Christmas to you and your family . Stay blessed

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