My first composition in italki I'm a high school student from China,my English is not good,so I desire to impove my English level.I enjoy music every much,like Pop music,Country music...I always liste

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My first composition in italki I'm a high school student from China,my English is not good,so I desire to impove my English level.I enjoy music every much,like Pop music,Country music...I always listening Eenglish songs cause I perfervid European and American style,and I'll often use some supper popular in international apps,such as Instagram,Twitter,Snapchat and Youtube,for helping me learn more about English. I dreaming have a America tour,but now I shoud put my time on my studise.I love animal~so there are a dog and two hamsters in my home,my mom look after them most time : P I'd like to make friends with you guys,then we cloud study together and help each other :D Maybe there are many grammar mistakes in this composition, hope you can teach me from that.And thank you every much for reading this ; )

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My first composition in italki

I'm a high school student from China,my English is not good,so I desire (would like to sounds much better here. Desire is too formal) to impove my English level.I enjoy music every much,like Pop music,Country music...I always listening to Eenglish songs because I perfervid European and American style,and I'll often use some supper popular in international apps,such as Instagram,Twitter,Snapchat and Youtube,for helping me learn more about English.
I dreaming to take a tour around America have a America tour,but now I shoud devote my time to put my time on my studies studise.I love animals~so there are a dog and two hamsters in my home,my mom looks after them most time : P
I'd like to make friends with you guys,then we cloud study together and help each other :D
Maybe there are many grammar mistakes in this composition, hope you can teach me from that.And thank you every much for reading this ; )

My first composition in italki

I'm a high school student from China, my English is not very good so I desire wish to impove improve my fluency in it English level.I enjoy listening to music every much, like especially Pop music, and Country music... I always listening listen to English songs cause because I perfervid prefer European and American styles ("Culture" may be a more appropriate word here). Also, I'll often use some supper very popular in international apps, such as Instagram, Twitter, Snapchat and Youtube for to helping me learn more about English.
I dreaming about have having a America tour having a tour in America one day, but now I shoud should put my time concentrate on my studise studies. I love animals ~ so there are a dog and two hamsters in my home. My mom looks after them most of the time : P
I'd like to make friends with you guys, then so we cloud could study together and help each other out:D
Maybe there are many grammar mistakes in this composition, I hope you can teach me from that about them. And Thank you every much for reading this ; )

Note: Hi! I corrected your grammar errors and tried to make your writing sound more natural. Hope this helps! And by the way, remember to leave a space after every punctuation! :)

My first composition in italki

I'm a high school student from China and my English is not good, so I desire to improve my English level. I enjoy music very much and I listen to pop and country. I am always listening to English songs because I prefer European and American style. I often use some popular apps such as Instagram, Twitter, Snapchat and Youtube to help me learn English. I dream of having an America tour but at the moment I am focusing on my studies. I love animals and I have a dog and two hamsters, which my mum looks after most of the time.
I'd like to make friends with you guys so then we cloud study together and help each other. There may be many grammar mistakes in this composition but I hope you can correct me on my mistakes. Thank you very much for reading this ; ).

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